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Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-05-06 09:58 PM




Love took us on a journey
To another time and place
I felt so happy in your presence
Safe and warm in your embrace

We travelled the far horizons
And dived into the jewelled sea
On the crest of a wave of desire
Was where you gave your love to me

We scaled the peaks of passion
And ran through valleys of emerald green
We watched in awe as the sun set
The most beautiful sight we'd ever seen

I heard your words of love
Upon the warm Summer's breeze
I inhaled your scent through the flowers
And saw your image through the trees

The whispers in the wind
Spoke your words of love so true
As our hearts rehearsed love's symphony
I surrendered my love to you

Our love flowed along the creek
And filled the river so serene
We sampled the cool clear water
As the sun's reflection gleamed

Your love is all around me
Every hour of every day
In my heart you're always welcome
And where I hope you'll always stay

Suetang

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1 posted 2002-05-06 10:02 PM


"Your love is all around me
Every hour of every day
In my heart you're always welcome
And where I hope you'll always stay"




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, you are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, you have one of the most giving and loving hearts I know, this is an angelic artistic vision of pure love! (kiss on cheek) May you always hear his whispers in the wind and may they always melt your heart in every sunrise and sunset you share, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-05-06 10:07 PM


Sue,  I surely hope that HE enjoys your
poetry as much as we do....For you write
such romantic and loving words...

Bridget Shenachie
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since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056
Kansas USA
3 posted 2002-05-07 01:40 AM


Hi Sue!

I'm trying to decide whether I enjoy your romantic verse the most.  Ah shucks!  It's all good!  Thanks for sharing.

Shenachie

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