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Tim
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0 posted 2002-05-06 09:37 PM


Dew drops glisten, comes the dawn,
As sunlight dances on the lawn,
Darkness fading in retreat,
Before the glow of morning's greet.

Descends Elias from afar,
Afloat upon the dust of star,
Exhales the night in final gasp,
Inhales the dawn to new day's clasp.

Elias son, where do you flee?
What do you in the darkness see?
In the heaven's, stars so brignt,
'til your return in dawning's light.

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1 posted 2002-05-06 09:44 PM




(smiles) Oh Tim, this is wonderful, sweet friend, your wonderful words always bring sparkles to the stars and send us all sailing in orbit of inspiration! (big hugggssssss) This is a wonderful alternate version of this glorious poem, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tim, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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2 posted 2002-05-07 06:57 AM



Elias is such a very special child,
I would like to see more of his mild...

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