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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-05-06 08:14 PM

It's hard being me with the imprints of you
following in my shadow.
When I turn to touch you and you are
unreachable, I feel tortured
by the memories of your eyes last steal,
your kiss of the moment being too short
for my need, as I isolate each frame of you
into my nights collective dreams.

I pause you where I like, placing you in the fate
of my mind, so that your darkness
wraps around the frail of me
and I find comfort in the silence
of kissing eyes.
Did you know I dream your colors,
deep shades of you
to keep the nights promises
from drifting away?
Did you know I have conditioned myself
to a ritual of you never leaving my side,
being imprisoned by love
throughout the seasons of change?

You are a maze to me, as I search the right path
to reach your heart, and capture it
to share a warm moment in time,
when you give your heart to me in trust
and the forgotten one, is forgotten, no more.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

1 posted 2002-05-06 08:19 PM

This is just wonderful

bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2002-05-06 08:22 PM

hi bernie, where ya been hiding? *s

thank you

M

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

3 posted 2002-05-06 08:23 PM

Every single line is beautiful, Maureen.

~lots of hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

4 posted 2002-05-06 08:30 PM

Elegiac. Did I spell that right? Enjoyed...

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2002-05-06 08:33 PM

Thank you Lyra
hugssssss
missed you
M

and bsq..I can't tell you if you spelled it correctly as it isn't in my dictionary *s
hugss and smiling a thank you anyway
M

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

6 posted 2002-05-06 08:35 PM

m,

i felt the longing and yearning in this...
your heart beautifully displayed. it's
so hard to have love and yet have it just
out of reach...*sighs* i know just how hard
my friend...take care.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-05-06 10:07 PM

(sigh) This is soooooo compassionately heartfelt, sweet friedn, and may your search be complete forever more and may loves trust always come between you and tie the knot between your heart and his! (kiss on cheek) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

8 posted 2002-05-06 10:17 PM

I pause you where I like, placing you in the fate
of my mind, so that your darkness
wraps around the frail of me
and I find comfort in the silence
of kissing eyes.
Did you know I dream your colors,
deep shades of you
to keep the nights promises
from drifting away?
Did you know I have conditioned myself
to a ritual of you never leaving my side,
being imprisoned by love
throughout the seasons of change?

Love these lines and the intensity.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2002-05-06 10:20 PM

WynterGal~

I like EVERYTHING about this lovely read~
EVERYTHING ....
But this just sets the mood of a beautiful piece~

'I pause you where I like, placing you in the fate
of my mind, so that your darkness
wraps around the frail of me
and I find comfort in the silence
of kissing eyes.'

Gorgeous phrasing from the heart~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

10 posted 2002-05-06 10:26 PM

Hello Maureen

The love and longing was so very evident in your words, simply beautiful!

Take care.......Sue

Suetang

Gemini
Senior Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

11 posted 2002-05-06 10:30 PM

Beautiful, touching, sad. Hugs to you, lovely write.

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

12 posted 2002-05-06 10:47 PM

nakdthoughts...Beautifully written poem with superb poetic language. ***Ivy Rose

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

13 posted 2002-05-10 09:06 AM

Amy..Love out of reach..that's it exactly...

Noah, you are always so hopeful it makes me smile.*s

Duncan, that's me..too intense..I even wear myself out just in thought *s
Thank You.


Marge, yes I liked those lines too, never knowing where they  come from..I think there is someone else inside of me that I haven't met yet. *s
hugss
M

Sue,  Hope you are well, thank you

Gemini, Thank you for reading me and responding. I appreciate it.

Rose, Thanks for enjoying my words
M

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