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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Movement slows as numbness approaches if I had the strength to open the flood gates I would drowning would be quicker and final and definable this is not movement slows heart still beats if I had the strength I would stop it [This message has been edited by Duncan (05-06-2002 12:13 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 you certainly do have a way with the sad things in life, the truth |
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alterego Member
since 2002-02-23
Posts 113Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
 Do you ever sound like you need a hug  or maybe several Hope this is really not your present state of mind. Just words, I hope.  Sheila |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(BIG HUGGGSSSSSSS) Oh Duncan, this is sooooo very sad, sweet friend, I think time and time again we indeed feel this numbness and I too just wish it could stop! (sigh) Hold true to yourself and hang in there, sweet friend, for very soon the sun will come out and your heart will keep beating with joy and it will last so long you would never believe it! This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Duncan - very sad write, I've also felt like this at times. May peace smile on you... BC |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
And leaving us here behind? Nahhh won't do Duncan Go look for the sparkles of live They're there ya know just hidden for a short moment I'll give you one of my knuffels, alright? I think Deer wouldn't mind missing one.  TitiaA rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
I've felt this way. I usually sleep it off. Excellent write. Shenachie |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Duncan, This is so painful, and so sad. Hugs to you. I wish you peace in whatever you seem to be going through  Big hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
your writing...... ..... is growing..... like a sunrise..... ..... knowing.... dawn is peaking out..... ....... from behind mountaintops.... covered with snow..... melted rivelets of soul grow into rivers of live i love all the words of you you give |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Duncan~ Sometimes numbness is welcome ~ the anaesthetization of the soul. I hope that you are well and not a victim of what you describe so eloquently. This was a very vivid write, I could feel it. *warm hugs* ~Krista  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too [This message has been edited by SmittenKitten (05-06-2002 11:48 PM).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sweetie, what ever is going on, I wish it to get better soon. Awesome write, descriptive of the pain I have felt with recent heartbreak. Sandra |
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