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Open Poetry #20

So Began The Slide

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2002-05-06 10:23 AM

So began The Slide

A heart cries silently
Heart broken bound
Tears spill naturally
When no ones around

From cutting the ties
That sever the heart
Wounds felt deeply
When split wide apart

Left with this space
The lonliness aches
Empty vacant void
When my heartbreaks

I’m feeling helpless
So began the slide
Sad heart befallen
When crushed inside

Hope©2002

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

1 posted 2002-05-06 11:15 AM

Hope darling girl this is such an aching sorrowful write, you’ve written the emotion so well. If its only fiction I’m glad, if it’s not then here’s a ((((hug)))) wonderful writing darling girl utterly wonderful

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-05-06 11:37 AM

HopeS,
I only like sad poems when written well. And this was written well.

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

3 posted 2002-05-06 11:41 AM

Thanks for your sweet caring reply Marsha
Just those heartstrings go high and low ,
often feeling like a yo -yo
Hope

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

4 posted 2002-05-06 11:43 AM

Thanks Seymour for that kind reply , pleased you enjoyed ,
well now you have me smiling
Hope

bsquirrel

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since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

5 posted 2002-05-06 02:37 PM

Ouch.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-05-06 02:59 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Hope, this is so very sad, my heart goes out to you and I hope everything is alright, just as I pray for time to heal all the wounds in others broken hearts! (sigh) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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