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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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We were strangers in paradise in scrumptious shadows of forbidden fruit we shared passion like a delicious apple sharing each tender bite and blush of skin peeling with blue eyes as they roamed with perpetual sin unwrapping my gift of leopard and black silk lace unveiling the lust upon your face remember how it was way back then? when we were strangers in shadows of paradise "If music be the food of love, play on." (William Shakespeare) [This message has been edited by Victoria (05-06-2002 08:04 PM).] |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
~V~ Well I loved this, each line....what a soft, sensual gift to read this morning...  Lauren~ I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Victoria darling girl this is exquisite writing and your heart is clearly on show here utterly utterly wonderful. Utterly beautiful writing, do you ever do anything less than beauty, no darling girl you don’t, wonderful This is utterly gorgeous I love it darling heart    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
remember how it was way back then? when we were strangers in shadows of paradise ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Victoria, I know this feeling oh so very well. Lovely morning read....thank you. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) This is sooooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, your gorgeous words of love always light up these pages! (kiss on cheek) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Victoria, In scrumptious shadows Is a scrumptious write. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you so much Lauren..and i am glad you enjoyed with your coffee..hugs Marsha..thank you ms. moderater ha..hugs thank you nancy..that leopard and black lace is collecting dust now haa..*wink*hugs noah..thank you hon..  Sy..thank you [This message has been edited by Victoria (05-06-2002 01:03 PM).] |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
erotic without an "in your face" sexuality ~ I enjoyed reading this and could feel it. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I wish I could remember. Enjoyed. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Just lovely...James |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very sensual - enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Victoria - very soft write, black lace, love it... BC |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Victoria - very soft and sensual write... BC |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Opeth..thank you..im happy you enjoyed bsquirrel..thank you..you will ..ha.. james...thank you james..hugs chris..thank you so much...and for peeking in..hugs bill..Wow bill..two responses.haa..love them both hugs |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
We were strangers in paradise in scrumptious shadows of forbidden fruit we shared passion like a delicious apple Yum! Yes, I remember those days well, Victora...thanks for sharing them with us. ~scrumptious hugsLyra copyright2002 Lyra Nesius "poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks [This message has been edited by Madame Chipmunk (05-06-2002 08:48 PM).] |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Victoria Wow!! This was absolutely breathtaking. Your words flow effortlessly and uniquely and I love everything I read of yours. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
only have a min-u-et, but long enuff to taste the yum-dilly-iciousness of this poem with the Magic word: Shadows in it! Great choice! Sterling effort, Vic. No stuff! (g rated) jkf |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lyra..thank you dear..so great to hear from you hugss..  sue...thank you for those lovely words..hugss..and for peeking in tonight hon jeff...You didnt tell Dulcie about those paradise nights we use to have did you ??*wink* Just kidding Dulcie haa... |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Gee, I guess he forgot. *wg* (just kidding!) Couldn't let that go unanswered ya know. *Big silly grin* Loved this! You always did know how to make love sizzle! Nice job! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
How did I ever miss the first pass of this one... Nothing like love new and entering waters of the seas uncharted.... Your poetry always makes me hungry....for food....and.....well, you know... |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Dulcie..how could he ever forget me ha..*wink* hugs Barry..thank you ..i haven't been inspired to write lately...but ya never know when it will hit me again ha..hugss |
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