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eyesplus2
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since 2000-03-02

Posts 163
australia

0 posted 2002-05-06 07:41 AM

             I Touch You
                  You Hold your Breath

                  You Smile
             I Sigh with contentment

             I hold your hand
                 Your breath quickens

             I look into you eyes
                 You breathe into my soul

               The Breath of love.........

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

1 posted 2002-05-06 09:42 AM

eyesplus2 darling heart WOW this is utterly utterly delightful you’ve written an absolute diamond here. The flow of thought in this is wonderful and the rhythm absolutely divine. Absolutely perfect So much said with so little

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2002-05-06 09:44 AM

Lovely and soft - enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

3 posted 2002-05-06 02:42 PM

Who doesn't long for that breath from time to time? Enjoyed.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2002-05-06 02:51 PM

Wow, this was a nice breath of love's fresh air. Thanks!

Opeth
Senior Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 1543
The Ravines

5 posted 2002-05-06 02:51 PM

I was intrigued by the title...I don't believe that I have ever heard of the term "love" used in this manner. I know of the breath of life (from the bible), but the breath of love.

This was short, sweet and enjoyable.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-05-06 02:55 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooo romantic, sweet friend, your gorgeous words of love always fill these pages, I LOVE IT!!! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may true loves spirit always sing to your heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

7 posted 2002-05-06 02:59 PM

I too like the title of this romantic work! Sometimes the simple things can be so beautiful!! Like this!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2002-05-06 03:35 PM

Each line gets better and better...James

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