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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-05-06 05:47 AM


Mad At You

Yes you know I'm mad.
So why must you question me
as if you didn't know.
I need some time
to feel my feelings
on this matter.
My heart wants to
work this out
but my anger
won't let this go.
They say the way a
woman treats you now
gives a good indication
of tomorrow.
It seems to me
if we continue on
this current path
it will only lead
to pain and sorrow.
Perhaps we can come
to an understanding
or perhaps not.
For now let me
feel my feelings
and determine if this
is what I want.

JamesLee
May06
2002


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Marsha
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1 posted 2002-05-06 10:07 AM


James darling girl as always you write with such skill and this is excellent writing from you. Exquisite flow and the rhyme are utterly utterly spectacular. No one has ever said love was easy darling boy, in fact it’s the bumpiest path I know, and is it worth it? Oh yes I think it is Utterly utterly perfect

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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2 posted 2002-05-06 03:07 PM




(big huggssssssss) Oh James, this is so very sad, sweet friend, I hope everything is going alright with you, for you have such a golden heart and I wish for all the greatest happiness for you always! (sigh) I hope she will always feel the same as you do for her, sweet friend, my thoughts are with you, this is sad but beautiful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2002-05-06 03:29 PM


Thank you Marsha and Noah for the nice response...Everything is alright...I just get mad sometimes...Who can be sure that everything is alright but I think everything is alright...James
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4 posted 2002-05-06 05:08 PM


James,

I hope the two of you make up and get past whatever problems you have.
Best wishes,

rp

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
5 posted 2002-05-06 05:18 PM


James - you tell it like it is. Better to know now than later my friend...

BC

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6 posted 2002-05-06 05:38 PM


I will ditto what BC said....better to
work through a problem early,  than let it
fester till much later....You wrote this
extremely well.  

J. K. Mitchell
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7 posted 2002-05-06 06:25 PM


I stand up and applaud you.
This is dynamic and real.
I love it!

"The only love there is, is the love we make."--Prince

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