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I walk there with you..

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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 05-06-2002 05:31 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Stranger

know that I walk there
in the hidden places
where you look inside
when you heart strings play

songs of memories
and of little girl stories
I am the trees and sea
that you hide beside

when the sun peeks high
over purple mountains
I am the sand under your feet
the dark stones that warm your skin

I am the sound in your belly
when you dream of love
I am there under your skin
just missing the miss of you

know that I walk there with you

©Dark

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1 posted 05-06-2002 06:41 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

songs of memories
and of little girl stories
I am the trees and sea
that you hide beside

~*~

This brings back wonderful memories for me...thank you so much for my Monday morning wakeup...
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2 posted 05-06-2002 06:50 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

I am partial to your words, although I may not always respond, I always feel them behind the blue.

~soft smiles~
M

* and they are always nice to wake up to...

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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3 posted 05-06-2002 07:19 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

Sunshine, good morning ms...thank you for your wave and coffee flavor warmth

NT, thank you Maureen, I am pleased that
my words make good feelings for you to wake to..
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4 posted 05-06-2002 07:20 AM       View Profile for rwood   Email rwood   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rwood

I am the sound in your belly
when you dream of love
I am there under your skin
just missing the miss of you

know that I walk there with you


Sigh~..you walk..some of us run to those that love like this..

Sincerely,
Reg
Janet Marie
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5 posted 05-06-2002 07:47 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

I am the sound in your belly
when you dream of love
I am there under your skin
just missing the miss of you
=================================

how do you do this? go so deep beneath the readers skin? How ever you do it...promise us you will keep doing it
Dark Stranger
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6 posted 05-06-2002 07:58 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

Regina;

run if you will..
would catch you on the first
bounce..

thanks babe...


Janet Marie, thank you sweet ms, just showing feelings babe, I hope I never lose them or the desire to let them show..OR your eyes reading them

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7 posted 05-06-2002 08:54 AM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Dark~You write as though
you have known the reader
forever....
However you accomplish this
please don't ever stop....
~morning hugs~
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"I am the sound in your belly
when you dream of love
I am there under your skin
just missing the miss of you

know that I walk there with you"


DS~ Big sigh over here...that is such a loving comforting thought.  Sweet poet, this is the perfect poem to wake up to

*hugs*
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Dark Stranger
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Enchanting ...thank you ms, slow hug to you for your touch

SmittyKitty..thanks hon, you are such a treat to my words
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just out of reach


10 posted 05-06-2002 09:42 AM       View Profile for Nightshade   Email Nightshade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nightshade's Home Page   View IP for Nightshade

songs of memories
and of little girl stories
I am the trees and sea
that you hide beside

Dark - you must have heard me giggling as I peeked out to see who was watching. Love this one!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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Dark Stranger
Your hyperbole is like an injection. Well done.
Dark Stranger
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12 posted 05-06-2002 10:18 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

Chris, thanks lady, you bless me with the giggles.

Sy, thank you sir, I appreciate you
Dark Stranger
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Chris, thanks lady, you bless me with the giggles.

Sy, thank you sir, I appreciate you
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You have a tender heart, DS...It shows in this wonderful poem.
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DS darling boy this is an absolutely wonderful piece from you. I love it, The flow and the structure of this is excellent,. You really are a fine writer. I can really feel this deep in my soul, talking to me in that place where dreams reside. So mystical so intriguing darling heart really really excellent

This is exquisite writing darling absolutely exquisite, I love it utterly utterly


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

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I love the whole piece. I couldn't find a a part that was favored. I could hear every twig bend beneath my feet while hiding behind a tree. I could feel sand betwixt my toes and I could relax in the knowledge of a walk there with me.

There's the man I chose. There's my territory.....Shakira

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I am the sound in your belly
when you dream of love
I am there under your skin
just missing the miss of you

know that I walk there with you

Exactly.
Dark Stranger
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Martie, thank you sweet lady...I appreciate you.

Marsha, ms Mushy, thanks babe, might sweet of you to wave..

PhaChi, thanks ms, I enjoy your little smiles

Duncan, thank you sir for the review and comments

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (05-06-2002 01:33 PM).]

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it is the memory
of forest walks
and love given
without condition
that softens
the missing
of you
when darkness comes


Indigo

[This message has been edited by Indigo (05-06-2002 01:35 PM).]

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(big hugggssssss) Oh my gosh, this is so lovely, sweet friend, I just love how your words always peak as though you are sympathizing in a heartfelt conversation with the reader! (sigh) May love always be the sound in your belly and always walk with you to forever, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light alays shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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21 posted 05-06-2002 01:48 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

Indigo,

special place
for a special friend
when darkness is the sun
and there is no warmth

thank you lady and warm thoughts to you


Noah, you are a treat to the eyes amigo, thank you so much
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Sweet and calm.
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23 posted 05-06-2002 08:26 PM       View Profile for snowpants   Email snowpants   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit snowpants's Home Page   View IP for snowpants

'know that I walk there
in the hidden places
where you look inside
when you heart strings play

songs of memories
and of little girl stories
I am the trees and sea
that you hide beside'

Excellent write, DS...your words, as always, inspire me...I love this...

sp        

I've been down this road forever,
and the time has come to circle back home...

Dark Stranger
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BSQ, thanks amigo..

Snowpants, bless your eyes..thank you so much
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