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God come and help me
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God come and help me |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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God come and help me Let me know when to pray Life is getting complicated I know you up there Seeing this soul struggle This life got bitter But all through it I move You never once lend a hand All you provide were canes, I beg just like the rest At least that’s what you see But I ain’t taking For free Not even my sanity, So you better judge me right When my time is up Cause I am coming up With a lot of stress My time is not now You know that for sure just cause I am here doesn’t mean I forget what you put me through… Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.) [This message has been edited by Xeonox (05-06-2002 12:30 AM).] |
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CD Member
since 2001-01-27
Posts 101 |
this was a very timely piece. I enjoyed it quite a bit. Very well written. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssss) Oh Ronil, this is so very powerfully heartfelt, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope soon you will work thrpough all this stress as I know He will be here all the time when you need it the most! (sigh) This is very heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ronil, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Casanova Junior Member
since 1999-06-21
Posts 48Mays Landing NJ |
Xeonox, deep feelings here. Very well expressed, God bless you. -Cas [This message has been edited by Casanova (05-05-2002 11:51 PM).] |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Hello God is always listening and he will help you throught. Don't lose faith. I enjoyed this |
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