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Martie
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0 posted 2002-05-05 08:01 PM


        Poem to a Poet
I have been held in plenty's arms
With fingers touch let out my charms
Been swept from earth to enter place
Where fathom sees within my grace

You touch the core of hidden treasure
I'm lost in heart within this weather
Time moves up or it moves down
For you I open more than gown

I yearn to feel you come to me
Within the kingdom only we
Take me to your skins request
My touch to you would be hearts best

Let me not wither here in wait
For you this song is sung at gate
And spring now bathes me once again
In love you touched with just your pen

© Copyright 2002 Martie Odell Ingebretsen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-05-05 08:06 PM


"Let me not wither here in wait
For you this song is sung at gate
And spring now bathes me once again
In love you touched with just your pen"




(smiles) This is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your words always shine with the pure magic of poetry! (kiss on cheek) Your lovely words always bring spring to our hearts and sing to us like  ahppy bird in a birdbath, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiufl heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-05-05 08:10 PM


Exquisite...is the word that comes to mind at this moment Martie.
*sitting here shaking my head and smiling*
~Hugs~

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3 posted 2002-05-05 08:52 PM


soft whispers of love he gave
to one in heart who he saves
with pen and quill of such weight
upon thy lawn beyond the gate...

Whoever he is....he better get on
his horse and get over there...Right Now!

This is a beautiful poem Martie... He durn
sure better read it...

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4 posted 2002-05-05 09:34 PM


for you I open more than gown.

Ooooh. Yanno...I think I am probably much more intimate here on these blue pages, within my words, than I have ever been....

sssh..don't tell anybody!

Understanding hugs and smiles...

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5 posted 2002-05-05 09:43 PM



Martie~ This is beautiful...poetry brings so much to our lives.  I echo Serenity, I have shared so much within my words here in these blue pages than I ever would have imagined doing before.

A lovely write poetess...

*hugs*
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

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6 posted 2002-05-05 10:54 PM


Martie, this is such a sweet poem.  Nice work, my friend.
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7 posted 2002-05-05 11:25 PM


I'm on the phone to Delta as we speak!!!!

Martie...you are GOOD!!!!!!!

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8 posted 2002-05-05 11:29 PM


Such soulful beauty! This is a work of art Martie!
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9 posted 2002-05-06 05:42 AM


ms martie
lady loving love
and her woman feelings
is a poem to itself

enjoyed this ms

Elizabeth Santos
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10 posted 2002-05-06 06:36 AM


WOW! SUPERB!, not that I'm partial to rhyming, but this is awsomme!

This shows the diversity of your talents.
You are the best
Love ya
Liz

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11 posted 2002-05-06 06:40 AM



Ok.  So you leave me wondering how to respond when all I can do is smile...

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12 posted 2002-05-06 07:43 AM


You touch the core of hidden treasure
I'm lost in heart within this weather
Time moves up or it moves down
For you I open more than gown

I yearn to feel you come to me
Within the kingdom only we
Take me to your skins request
My touch to you would be hearts best

=============================

Oh Martie...how wonderful that you wrote me this beautiful poem...I am so...ERRR..what? not for me?  hahaha OK YEAH I KNEW THAT!!!
you KNOW I love this ...and may I say thats one heck of a muse ya got there me girlie
very very cool write Ms Martie...love that last line.

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13 posted 2002-05-06 09:33 AM


Martie~
Such a beautiful poem, very warm and sweet, loved it very much
~HUGS~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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14 posted 2002-05-06 09:47 AM


Martie,
I just met Balladeer at Delta, we're both coming. An exquisite write.

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15 posted 2002-05-06 02:40 PM


Intelligent eroticism. -- as a poem should be

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (05-06-2002 02:41 PM).]

Martie
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16 posted 2002-05-06 07:30 PM


Thank you all so much for these lovely replies!  
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17 posted 2002-05-06 09:22 PM


Martie...I'm not used to seeing rhyme drip from your pen, but I must say that you do it so very beautifully
~hugs of rhyme

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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18 posted 2002-05-06 10:27 PM


Martie~

'I have been held in plenty's arms
With fingers touch let out my charms
Been swept from earth to enter place
Where fathom sees within my grace'


And I've just been touched with poet's pen~
Martiesque at her best~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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