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Loving Thought (20 or less)
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Loving Thought (20 or less) |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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Let me hold you a moment to breathe your softness, exhale in gentle thoughts of touching your heart ~~~~~ ~Inspired~ I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings Could I have been anyone other than me True poems rest between the words Just give hope a chance to float up [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (05-05-2002 06:05 PM).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is simply beautiful!!! Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Lauren darling girl YOU are a superb writer my friend, the flow and structure of this is wonderful. Fabulous writing and the language usage in it is stunning, this is such a beautiful poem, truly exquisite writing The wonder of it is awesome Absolutely excellent darling girl and I love it utterly    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Lauren, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just love it when you write of love, sweet friend, this is a true breathtaking sentiment! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a ebautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lauren, Your words are like the cooing of a dove, enjoyed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lauren! Now you just KNOW that the twenty or less in the title grabbed me, huh?!  I love reading and writing these short ones. This one is very very special...well done! ~Hugs~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
How a book of a thousand pages can be written in less than 20 words...You have shown this. Excellent... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very beautiful, Lauren. Sandra |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
An inspiration well worth sharing ... you are in my thoughts. *s |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
*hugs* ~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lauren, Gentle on the heart, gentle on the ears and gentle on the eyes. What more could he want?  |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Lauren, as always, beautifully said. this is just lovely *sighs* take care. amy "you can't stop |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Such sweet thoughts, Lauren. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
It's impossible to read this without a soft smile forming on the lips.....beautiful, Lauren |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Lauren, I know I have said this before.. but you write soooooooooo pretty Once again I enjoyed.Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
i lovvvvvvve your loving thoughts! (hugs) |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
ok, sure. you can. soft, sweet, smoothe. C |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I like 20 or less poems like this...doesn't take to long to read and it gives me more time to embrace the thoughts...James |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Lauren...this is beautiful. I am glad I found it this morning. alan |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
very Soft and tender Lauren...loved it hugs ~Victoria |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
The essence of gentle love. |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
You look at life in a a way that is inspirational to me. enjoyed! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Greeneyes - Yes indeed, a very loving thought... BC |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Quite beautiful and breathing. |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
This is truly wonderful. "The only love there is, is the love we make."--Prince |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Beautifully expressed, Lauren ~tons of hugsLyra |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
*sets his shoulder low* *takes a deep breath* *braces his feet* *exhales* was it good for you? hehehe. -Dave [edited because HTML is HARD] [This message has been edited by NapalmsConstantlyConfused (05-06-2002 09:06 PM).] |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I just wanted to thank everyone for the kind replies, and for you, taking your time to read.....HUGSSS to you all...  with warm regard... Lauren~ I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings |
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