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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-05-05 04:30 PM


Adventures of Ian (Nice To Be Noticed)

At seventeen Ian already had his first kiss.
He was playing baseball in his neighborhood.
He hit one to right field pretty good and it just
so happened a girl named Suzy was playing that ball.
The sun must of gotten into her eye because that ball hit her dead on her thigh.
Ian ran to right field and offered to rub the pain away.
That's when he noticed she wanted his hand to stay.
Ian had wanted her for a friend so he liked the idea that she liked him.
Later in the evening as the sunset she and Ian shared the early part of a evening together.
Suzy had invited Ian to take a walk to talk and get to know each other a little better.
They were walking and talking and telling jokes and Ian was having loads of fun and then she pushed him away and started to run.
Ian gave chase and tackled her in the park so at the same time the sunset they found themselves lying in the dark.
Ian wasn't sure what to do but this chain of events didn't slow down Sue.
She wrapped her arms around Ian and she wouldn't let him go.
Ian found he liked the attention and went with the flow.
That's when she planted her lips dead on his.
This young boy of seventeen that had never been kissed.
It only took Ian a moment to return that kiss.
He liked it he loved it he was all over her lips.
Ian couldn't help but notice how nice it was to be noticed.

JamesLee
May05
2002  

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1 posted 2002-05-05 04:36 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I am 18 1/2 now and I still dream for my first kiss os so much, it must be the most beautiful feeling in the world and I want to share it with my Joanna more than anyone in the whole wide world! (sigh) This is such a beautiful poem of love and dreams coming true, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-05-17 02:08 PM


Boy do I know this feeling well. It is very nice to be noticed, and I hope you are noticed again as you go back to the top.

                              Dawn

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3 posted 2002-05-17 03:56 PM


Smiling here...ah, memory lane. Yes, it certainly is nice to be noticed and no one forgets their first kiss
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2002-05-17 04:27 PM


Thank you Noah and Dawn and Hoot Owl for the nice response...yes it is nice to be noticed...especially if a kiss is involved...James
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