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Aimster
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0 posted 2002-05-05 03:58 PM




my heart lies still in the darkness except for the beating of you
my eyes closed, I sigh deeply as I'm reminded of this love true
memories of you and I together flash through my mind
how I wish I could either fast forward or rewind time

being without you I feel lost and alone
I lay here wondering when my heart can go home
we both know the reasons of why we can't see each other
doesn't change the fact that our love will last forever

I look over to your picture, your smile reflecting back at me
soon I tell myself you and I will be set free
together in one another's arms once more
we'll go to our special place, where our hearts and souls soar

the sky is blue, but inside my heart it's cloudy and gray
I wish you were here to take away this hurt I feel today
I'd embrace you and hold you and declare my love that's only for you
You'd chase away this feeling of lonliness, fading away this ache of blue

our eyes would dance with romance, as candle light would flicker nearby
our hearts beating as one, we'd make the sweetest love, no longer would we cry
for now though, all we have is our voices, the words we use to convey how we feel
soon though our eyes will meet again, and the pain in our hearts will heal

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

© Copyright 2002 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-05-05 04:04 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Amy, this is soooooo beautifully heartwrenching, sweet friend, I hope now your love has come back to you and now you always share such happiness together and your heart sings with fulfillment! (kiss on cheek) This is so very touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2002-05-05 04:11 PM


Yes we can really miss them when they're not around...James
nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2002-05-05 04:41 PM


the sky is blue, but inside my heart it's cloudy and gray
I wish you were here to take away this hurt I feel today
I'd embrace you and hold you and declare my love that's only for you
You'd chase away this feeling of lonliness, fading away this ache of blue
that's me...today

hugss
M

rosepetals25
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4 posted 2002-05-05 11:42 PM


Amy,

   You KNOW I understand this one.  Soon the words will become embraces.. the day is coming for both of us.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

RosePetal
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5 posted 2002-05-05 11:58 PM


Aw Amy I really want to see you happy so I hope everything works out the way you want it to.  (hugs)
Boy have I been there before!!

Duncan
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6 posted 2002-05-06 12:11 PM


I remember this place, you've written it well.
Marsha
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7 posted 2002-05-06 12:16 PM


Amy darling lil sis of my heart this was as usual for you utterly utterly wonderful. Do you know how utterly beautiful this poem is? The style is pure you, breathtakingly lovely and the execution is without doubt one of your finest ever.

The aching sadness of a long distance relationship you’ve effortlessly portrayed so well just shows how wondrous your writing is. Truly exceptional writing, I love it love it love it


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


Aimster
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Charlotte, NC
8 posted 2002-05-06 06:07 PM


thanks to everyone for your kind
words...they mean everything to me
these days. hope you all are well!
take care.
love you.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

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