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Dragon's Destiny
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Dragon's Destiny |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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a beast most fowl of fire does wait in lie Against the odds of life and limb and more one man of blood and steel awaits the cry In darkened cave among the bones of prey fierce lizard green does wait in sleep of when a soul of strength most brave does come to slay this demon winged by piercing heart through skin A crunch of bones upon the floor does wake the foe of man to be most careful then for slaying is the chosen death to take as dragon’s last foul breath is taken in The steel is swung and strikes a mighty blow as shrieks from in the gut of beast emit Blood and bowel from evil creature now flow as flash of steel does rend scaled flesh to split Shadow cast o’er the moon at sound of cry as then a dragon soars in hunting flight in want of heart of man as one must die beneath the silver moon of star filled night [This message has been edited by Magnus (05-05-2002 10:38 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Magnus! Marvelous! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thank You Sunshine...Good Morning Kansas! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy this is utterly utterly perfect, you’ve really surpassed yourself this time. Normally your writing is superb, in this one poem you have painted a picture of such clarity that I can see the vision This is exceptional writing, certainly I’ve come to expect the very best from you, creatively and in language form. This is a real beauty, and absolutely wonderful first class piece. YOU do know I LOVE this don’t you? Good it is splendiferous   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Mushy, you know I love splendiforous...or whatever that word is...... Good morning darling girl! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW Barry! Blow me away with this one so early in the day, why don't ya?! Haven't even got my White Shoulders on yet.  Excellent write m'friend. ~Sunday Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Nancy....YES, I noticed the lack of the perfume.... Started this last nite and finished this Morn....glad you enjoyed... Good Morning. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Shadow cast o’er the moon at sound of cry as then a dragon soars in hunting flight in want of heart of man as one must die beneath the silver moon of star filled night Nicely penned as always barry..you get better and better all the time..loved it hugs ~Victoria |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yeah, like old wine that gets better as time goes along....Right!!!! Thanx Vic. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! This is a fabulous addition to your wonderful dragon anthology, sweet friend, I remember well your wonderful Karbar series and it seems this one is promising to be another fabulous story in the making! (big hugggssssss) This is simply marvelous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
You are such a valiant knight Sandra |
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