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vandana
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0 posted 2002-05-05 10:22 AM



Yeah
Yes,
It Is true,
You have got everything
They say
You have got everything
Because you have got kind of love
That you can give,
You have got kind of loving
You stay alive
throughout all these years
Never asked for snything
Because you have got everything,
I know
you can't give forever,
but you can live for It
The kind of love
you have
You have got everything
Yes you do
You have got everything
you want
In your life
Can't you see
you have a heart
A heart to steal love away
You have got everything
That I don't have
You have got everything
You have got everything....

[This message has been edited by vandana (05-05-2002 10:23 AM).]

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-05-05 10:24 AM


Vandana,
A lovely and sincere write, enjoyed.

Marsha
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2 posted 2002-05-05 11:03 AM


Vandana darling girl OH my word this is excellent writing, what can I say darling heart your writing shines through every single word. You’ve always written well, often excellently right now you are simply soaring.

You know I love this, it flows with the smoothness of silk, beautiful work darling girl utterly utterly superb, and of course I love it utterly


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


RosePetal
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3 posted 2002-05-05 11:16 AM


Sometimes the people who have got everything do not know how to use it wisely.
I enjoyed this so much V

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2002-05-05 03:50 PM


Enjoyed...James
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5 posted 2002-05-05 04:08 PM




(smiles) Oh Vandana, this is sooooo very true, sweet friend, it troubles me to see so many never satisfied with what they have or never take the time to appreciate the simple gifts of life and they are always unhappy and greedy! (big hugggssssss) May you find all your heart desires and forever find happiness in your golden heart, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2002-05-05 05:43 PM


Wonderful write here Vandana!
Enjoyed very much.
~Hugs~

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