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eyesplus2
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0 posted 2002-05-05 08:06 AM



                A Life
               A Secret Life
               A Secret Life of Us

            
                A life that touches all
                Yet is touched by one


                A secret that is held in the heart
                A heart that is a secret to none


              Us that is one yet is a secret
                     to two


                   A secret life of us........

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2002-05-05 09:22 AM


Enough to say I understand. A very simple write, but a very apt portrayal of heart.

Well done. L)

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2 posted 2002-05-05 09:25 AM


Eyesplus2 darling heart this is utterly utterly perfect, the flow  is utterly utterly divine. I love way your mind flows here, truly something special. Wonderful writing from you darling


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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3 posted 2002-05-05 06:55 PM




(smiles) This is fabulous, sweet friend, may the spirit of this secret love always touch your heart and fill you with delight! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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