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ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2002-05-05 02:41 AM

One's giving
for another's take
their living
within shadow's ache

Surrender
heart silently lost
into her
whatever the cost

create an addiction .... share a smile!!

Elan
Member

since 2002-05-03

Posts 382
State of Wide Eye

1 posted 2002-05-05 09:35 AM

Sometimes there are only takers
and the givers cannot stop
so sow the seed very well
perhaps the takers shall give crop

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

2 posted 2002-05-05 10:17 AM

CT darling boy this is utterly divine I love it, you always seem to be able to write the moment. Excellent writing darling boy

Simply fabulous really well written

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

3 posted 2002-05-05 11:25 AM

Craig,

It has been way to long since I've stopped in to read some of your writings. I have been depriving myself of such beauty, I almost forgot how incredable you write. Can ya tell I liked this just a little?

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-05-05 11:28 AM

Craig! Now you just KNOW how I love these 20 or less poems!!
This one is perfect!
Love it....just love it!!

~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2002-05-05 11:32 AM

Sweet surrender....Ha! Nothing sweet about
the feeling as one who gives....

You have said this very well Craig...

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-05-05 05:43 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, I just love the gorgeous words you share with us all, sweet friend, I just love twenty or less poems and this is fabulous! (sigh) This is a true gem, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

7 posted 2002-05-05 05:55 PM

ctowen - this was a joy to read and going into my library!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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