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vandana
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0 posted 2002-05-04 06:24 PM



Why so long?
So long to take the time,
Why so long?
To understand my feelings
for you

Why you never did say
these words?
Before It went late
Why so long?
So long
to think
So long to tell you love me

So long,
Goodbye never meant anything to me
Since only why so,
long took to think over Iove
Only your love mattered,

Why so much to think
over our love
why so long?

So my song
We sung,
Do you know why?
Do you understand
what our love mattered to us?
Why so long?

Sometimes
It hurts
When I remember these  words
Only our love mattered,
Why so long?


[This message has been edited by vandana (05-04-2002 06:30 PM).]

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Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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Victoria Australia
1 posted 2002-05-04 06:53 PM


vandana,
sometimes there are no answers to the questions that drive us but you wrote about it well, your peice is full of angst.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



JamesMichael
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2 posted 2002-05-04 08:57 PM


I have thought these thoughts myself...James
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3 posted 2002-05-04 09:01 PM




(sigh) These are indeed such powerful yearnings and questions, sweet friend, I know only time will tell but you will be blessed by pleasant suprises soon enough! (kiss on cheek) This is amazing, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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