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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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A simple reflection emerges to extend thoughts blowing the wind and sea, distant horizons simple shapes times like this, nothing softer, nothing less will do You awaken, living life, sometimes in a static between stations, between answers white noise hoping to find yourself pondering, each moment silent searching for something to hold an indication this is where you want, need to be Fingers of my soul await a song, like hunger they become your name, words depart briefly from my lips shifting deeper among my life, my heart wrapped in layers Kiss sweetly the palm of your hands reading poetry, speak of rain dancing, reciting each I, we, us with closed eyes, each trickle, drop rolling softly falling Hearing your words, feeling your words, stir my emotions I place my heart upon my sleeve open, exposed, raw beautiful in the main character of love but for how long? I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings Could I have been anyone other than me True poems rest between the words Just give hope a chance to float up [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (05-04-2002 12:18 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Greeneyes A lovely how and why, enjoyed. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Lauren darling girl this is as always simply perfect. Sometimes when the inspiration twirls me around and spins me into dreams I reach out with my mind and feel you there in that sanctum of my poetic thought. Teasing me to stretch my mind a little more, calling to me to condense and distil that thought into pure drops of liquid inspiration. They fall on my page and I’m off again. Truly wonderful writing darling heart, absolutely excellent. Deeply meaningful writing as are all of your poems. This especially so I think    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 [This message has been edited by Marsha (05-04-2002 02:33 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Lauren, a soft, flowing piece of romantic excellence...Nicely written... |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
softly wonderful |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Hearing your words, feeling your words, stir my emotions I place my heart upon my sleeve open, exposed, raw beautiful in the main character of love but for how long?"   (smiles) This is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may this magic last forever and may these white noise of whispers always recite language of loves doves to you! (kiss on cheek) This is soft and touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lauren, Sounds like forever should be just about right! Wonderful write. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Fingers of my soul await a song, like hunger they become your name, words depart briefly from my lips shifting deeper among my life, my heart wrapped in layers Kiss sweetly the palm of your hands reading poetry, speak of rain dancing, reciting each I, we, us with closed eyes, each trickle, drop rolling softly falling Hearing your words, feeling your words, stir my emotions I place my heart upon my sleeve open, exposed, raw beautiful in the main character of love but for how long? =============================== Each time you touch it...it becomes more exquisite. Beautiful Lauren...written with a pen of exhale   ... and I don't know why ... |
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