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Let Not Love Become
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Let Not Love Become |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Let not my words upon deaf ears now fall though whispers land as feathers upon eyes Take not my heart from darkness of my all till truth’s long trek does finish and arrives Soft breath that falls like dew upon my face small beads of heaven sent by voice to me A love once found time’s tick will not erase an evermore of love through life to be Will not the feel of heart become anew among the field of hope’s young dream in grow as sand foretells the flow of time of two before the mount sheds tears of white in snow. Love found in cup of clear and carved new glass shall take in stride the flow of time in pass. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling heart, this is utterly divine, as always your writing far surpasses the mere brilliant and is superb. You know I love this, that is a given of course. Will not the feel of heart become anew among the field of hope’s young dream in grow as sand foretells the flow of time of two before the mount sheds tears of white in snow. Love found in cup of clear and carved new glass shall take in stride the flow of time in pass These lines are truly exquisite and YOU know I utterly utterly love it. Why is it do you suppose that your writing far surpasses the mere ordinary and soars into wonderment? Well, whatever the reason I utterly utterly love it   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A sonnet from Magnus...now this is how to spend a cloudy cool Kansas morn... Good morning Sir...and thank you very much! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, Let not my words upon deaf ears now fall though whispers land as feathers upon eyes Take not my heart from darkness of my all till truth’s long trek does finish and arrives Wonderful start. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thank You Mushy....Happy to give you a little tidbit for the morning...or is it afternoon? |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Good Morning KJ....a welcome morning to you as well... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Sy...I feel complemented.. Good Morning!! |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Love found in cup of clear and carved new glass shall take in stride the flow of time in pass." that is really a beautiful sentiment, I liked the whole poem, but those ending lines really stood out for me.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Barry, Enjoyed the entire sonnet, but the closing couplet is outstanding! Wonderful....Hugs. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Let not my words upon deaf ears now fall though whispers land as feathers upon eyes This was so beautiful Barry...i have alot of catching up to do as i was away for a few days in Colorado Springs..hugss ~Victoria |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sue...pleases me greatly when you enjoy my words...thank you very much Nancy...must have been the White Shoulders that inspired me...huh? (kidding)...LOL Vic... You have been missed....Skiing?? No broken bones... Thank You dear one.. |
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