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Guardurthoughts
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since 2001-10-16
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0 posted 2002-05-03 10:36 PM



Love is lost
When love is broken
Broken when torn
Torn when left alone
Left alone
Love is lost

Love is pain
When love is taken advantage off
Not seeing what it does to me
Kills me slowly
Left to die
Love is pain

Love is sadness
When I sit here and cry
Cry because you are not here
You are not here
To show you love me to
Love is sadness

Love is dead
When
You
Die
Inside

~~~Gaurdurthoughts~~~
"the best and most beautiful things cannot be seen,or even touched. they must be felt with the heart"

© Copyright 2002 Erica Grover - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2002-05-04 02:12 AM


Erica,
it seems love is all these things, it's a pity we can't live without it. Good piece.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



JamesMichael
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2 posted 2002-05-04 06:24 AM


This is not the side of love we want to feel...hope love gets better for you...James
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3 posted 2002-05-04 11:23 PM




(big huggssssssss) Oh Erica, this is so very heartbreaking, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope now a true and worthy love has filled your heart and healed all your wounds and brought amends to your heart! (sigh) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Erica, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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