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TriXter
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The One

0 posted 2002-05-03 05:54 PM



I waited, now youre gone.
I saw him today, the one that sweapt you off youre feet.
You dont know what you're missing,
Youd be a princess in my heart.

he cares not about you,
he cares what you wear,he cares how u act,
I care about you staying the same.
Youre wonderous laugh, youre heart warming smile.
but I waited.

If i had not been so afraid of how id act,
if i was just me around you, If i had shown u ME..
Youd be by my side.
Now i await freinds, to drown my sorrows in some drinks,
They will reassure me you'll soon be mine, but I know it cannot be true.

For the beauty that is you, noone would want to let go.
I know i would not.
So i shal see him with you,
now, forever, always.
and I shal shead a tear eatch time, but hide my sorrow.
For you are happy.
and that is all that matters.

The man of few words...

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1 posted 2002-05-03 06:14 PM


Ooo! Love the twist... This should be a slammin', screamin' grrl punk song! Pwease?
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2 posted 2002-05-03 09:46 PM




(sigh) This is soooooo beautiuflly bittersweet, sweet friend, I believe this is no greater generousity than to wish someone for true happiness,e ven if you love that person and they don't love you as much! (big hugggsssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiufl heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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