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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2002-05-03 03:08 PM



Stars Are For Always
~*~
Should the stars disappear
I'll seek the moon
and whisper desperate pleas
in hopes he'll dust the night with diamonds
so you can see what I feel
when the lights kiss the sky
then our lips will eargerly cling
and I'll know
stars are for always


BloomingRose



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Janet Marie
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1 posted 2002-05-03 03:37 PM


and whisper desperate pleas
in hopes he'll dust the night with diamonds
so you can see what I feel
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what a lovely poetic thought...beautiful imagery and emotional express.
Well done Poetess Rose...good to see you here again.

... and I don't know why ...
Why should love come down and just sweep me away
I want to fly ... but there are so many things in my way.

J Browne

bsquirrel
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2 posted 2002-05-03 03:48 PM


My god that was beautiful. Belongs on placards!
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2002-05-03 04:44 PM


Debra~This is just so perfectly beautiful.
I have missed reading you...
Welcome back.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-05-03 08:12 PM




(smiles) This is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always light the skies of Passions just as I know the starlight of true love is bound to freckle your heart! (kiss on cheek) This is enchanting, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

BloomingRose
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5 posted 2002-05-04 08:19 AM


JM~ Thank you much. I have not been on very much, but mostly hanging out in the pub when I get a chance.

Bsquirrel~ Thank you very much. Such a nice reply!

Enchant~ Thanks for the warm welcome back!

Noah~ Always... thank you so much.

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2002-05-04 04:03 PM


"Our lips will eagerly cling"...James
vandana
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7 posted 2002-05-04 06:11 PM


liked it
Chelsea~
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8 posted 2002-05-04 08:51 PM


blooming rose,

This is just so pretty!

Elan
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9 posted 2002-05-04 09:12 PM



You wear your name well
in your poetry...
may you always bloom so...

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