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To love (VAS's challenge)
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To love (VAS's challenge) |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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I often wonder if you have imitated your finger-wagging habit from Alicia of Survivor Outback You did it again, dismissing my protests aside in the process, like the way car wipers steadily brushed away raindrops, crushing them to nothingness You said I had an inferiority complex I was just being honest i am not worth your candle It sounds so cliched to say "I'm your average typical guy", like I lack the grey cells to invent original lines But it's true. I'm unstudious, unathletic, unstreetsmart, unfunny the -un prefix tags to me like a leech~ i can't offer you as much as other guys can i am not worth your candle If you walk away and let the more deserving savour your flame, I would have understood But you stand by me unconditionally Thank you so much (just don't irritate me with the finger-wagging thingy) heehee [This message has been edited by faterider (05-03-2002 09:36 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Yes, that's right, that's right! So maybe perhaps you are not the star of some basketball team or a very famous inventor, but you do have one thing deep down in your heart that is so very special and that is the purity of true love! (big hugggssssss) Never change who you are, sweet friend, you are a very special person and all your dreams will come true if you believe in them! (sigh) This is a wonderful challenge reply, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Heng, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (05-03-2002 01:40 PM).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Fantastic, Faterider!! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Noah and VAS, thank you for reading and for sharing your thoughts...much appreciated |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Hey, this is great too!!!  (yeah yeah... everything seems great to me  so what?)Finger wagging huh??? let me guess who is wagging fingers at you... your mom? ur girlfriend??? your lecturer???? _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"i am not worth your candle It sounds so cliched to say "I'm your average typical guy", like I lack the grey cells to invent original lines" And here I've always thought you had a surplus of those grey cells.   |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Mon Cherie, nay, this is just a writing exercise, nothing more...and sadly, i am still searching for a girlfriends... er, thanks Kacy...i'm blushing  |
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