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SmartChick
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0 posted 2002-05-03 10:42 AM


Sorry it's taken me so long. But here it is. My attempt for Svens challenge.


Sometimes It's Nice To Have

Way back when the world began
You never heard of such a thing
They come in so many colors now
At times they are quite annoying

You could have one in every room
Friends can always stay in touch
What would they do without it
For them it would be way too much

You can just sit it on the table
Or you can put it upon the wall
It is a very handy thing to have
If you should happen to take a fall
By Sue 5-2-02



© Copyright 2002 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-05-03 11:04 AM


SmartChick
My guess would be your handy telephone, enjoyed.

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2 posted 2002-05-03 12:11 PM


Cute, but I don't know what the challenge was. I am always a day late
Sandra

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3 posted 2002-05-03 02:23 PM




(smiles) Yes, I believe also it is a phone for you can hang a telephone on the wall or cellular phones can be placed on a table! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-05-03 03:45 PM


You do the job well and I too think it's a telephone?

Imagination is more important that knowledge
~* Einstein said so *~

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5 posted 2002-05-03 04:31 PM


keeping the answer to himself

this is great SC. . . you made the object appear here very well. . . great work. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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