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This Morning
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This Morning |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
This morning, I woke up this morning Couldn't stop smiling Today Feeling all alone Looking at the rain The rain just brought me back At those days of love And rain The way we used to smile and going crazy In the rain We didn't care about the people On the street So this morning As I open my eyes And my heart, Couldn't stop smiling at myself This morning, Looking outside at the rain Coffee on my hand, Can't get you off my mind The whole story of my life, Being alone Staring at the picture of you This morning Couldn't stop thinking about you This morning.... |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
I like this very much, Vandana... there is a quality about it that is both hopeful, and realistic... keep writing... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Enjoyed this vandana! Well done! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the sun does things to you, doesn't it?? wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
SEA's gonna love this one. I know I did. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) This is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you always live on with these special memories of sunshine and love close to your heart! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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