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Ivy Rose
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0 posted 2002-05-02 11:37 PM



How far must a heart travel
before it finds its secret place?
And, how deep must a heart search
before it finds love beyond time or space?
There is a garden, a secret spot
where love is kept in patient waiting
for a matching soul, its other half,
the perfect partner for its mating.
Only one can enter this secret garden:
one who is meant for you and I,
bringing to life the blooms within,
the perfect love that will not die.
And, what road must a heart travel down
before it finds its Rose of special grace?
It must journey down an uncharted path
until it recognizes the perfect face.

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1 posted 2002-05-02 11:41 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo wonderfully enchanting, sweet friend, and may you find true hope and blessings beyond the primrose path and soon encounter the one who will forever love you! (kiss on cheek) True love is always around the next bend, sweet friend, always hold your dreams close and they will come true, we all love you so much, this is spellbindingly beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

KimW
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2 posted 2002-05-02 11:55 PM


"It must journey down an uncharted path
until it recognizes the perfect face." - Yes.

Simply lovely.


ecrivan
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3 posted 2002-05-03 01:05 AM


eternal question..how far must the heart travel..nicely done


BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
4 posted 2002-05-03 01:37 AM


Your words are a poetic garden in themselves.
Lovely, lovely!

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2002-05-03 06:16 AM


Enjoy your thoughts...James
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6 posted 2002-05-03 08:15 AM


IvyRose~

This is so lovely~

'There is a garden, a secret spot
where love is kept in patient waiting
for a matching soul, its other half,
the perfect partner for its mating.'


Oh ... I have entered the garden and found it just as you've written~
A touching piece of excellent writing~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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