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SmittenKitten
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where the sky and horizon meet

0 posted 2002-05-02 10:45 PM



I soak in his gaze
like a bubble bath
Dance in his smile
like the sun on the sea
I float in his arms
like a bird in the sky
Sigh in his touch
like the wind through trees

I whisper into his heart
and tickle his soul
Linger on his lips
kiss the tips of his toes
Map all his freckles
and count all his scars
Trace his ear lobes
and touch nose to nose

Soul visiting soul
it replays every night
Every sigh, every touch
in my dreams I'm in love

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

© Copyright 2002 Krista C. - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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1 posted 2002-05-02 10:49 PM


Krista,
Talk about sweet dreams...this is it. Wow, I love it.

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-05-02 10:56 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I have missed reading your gorgeous words so much! (kiss on cheek) May you always be visited by true love in your dreams and may all these dreams come true for you, sweet friend, this is wonderful, we all love you so much, I love that new picture you have up! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krista, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

SmittenKitten
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3 posted 2002-05-02 11:12 PM



BearyLarry~ It'd be an even sweeter reality, but I'll take what I can get!   Thanks for stopping in and I'm so glad you enjoyed!

SweetNoah~  Hehe, your reply is just brimming with smiles   and now I am too!  Thank you!  I've missed your words too, can't wait to read them again.

*hugs to you both*

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2002-05-03 08:42 AM


SmittenKitten~

'I whisper into his heart
and tickle his soul'


What a precious thought -
Dreams can become reality ... I hope yours does~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2002-05-03 09:25 AM


smittykitty...I go to the same place
and see her there..
she smiles and even say's "hi" sometimes
then tells the 3 doberman's and the body guard it is ok...long as I don't get any closer.

dug it babe

SmittenKitten
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6 posted 2002-05-03 10:34 AM



Marge~ Awww, thanks Marge *hugs back*

DS~ Hehehe   You goofball...I think she's trying to tell you something!
Thanks for 'digging' it.  *Your* eyes are appreciated. *hugs*

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Marsha
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7 posted 2002-05-03 11:59 AM


Krista darling girl OH my word this is excellent writing, what can I say darling heart your love clearly shines through every single word. You’ve always written well, often excellently right now you are simply soaring.

You know I love this, it flows with the smoothness of silk, beautiful work darling girl utterly utterly superb, and of course I love it utterly


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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Deep in the heart
8 posted 2002-05-03 12:02 PM


Wow.  That is what I call a dream

catalinamoon
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9 posted 2002-05-03 12:09 PM


I like your dreams.
Sandra

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10 posted 2002-05-03 06:40 PM


Sad and soft and so right.
Enchantress
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11 posted 2002-05-03 06:52 PM


This is wonderful Krista!
Wish I had dreams like this!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

SmittenKitten
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12 posted 2002-05-03 10:31 PM



Mushy~ Hehe, girly, you just gush when you reply!  I love it   Thank you so much for the smiles!  *hugs*

Interloper~ Tell me about it!  Now if only I could make it reality...

Sandra~ Thank you...I like this one too   Wish I could have it all the time!

bsquirrel~ Thank you, your visit and words are much appreciated

Nancy~ You can borrow it as a day dream anytime!   Thank you for popping in.

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

JamesMichael
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13 posted 2002-05-04 05:46 AM


Lovely...one of my favorites...I'm in love in real life...James
nakdthoughts
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14 posted 2002-05-04 05:57 AM


a lovely write, beautiful picture..and I love this thought


"I whisper into his heart
and tickle his soul"

~smiling
Maureen

SmittenKitten
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15 posted 2002-05-04 08:46 AM



James~ Thank you James.  And so wonderful to hear you're in love   Although I already knew from your poetry!

Maureen~ Thank you for stopping in.  I love to read what catches people's eyes

*hugs to you both*

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 2002-05-04 04:35 PM


SmittenKitten
Excellent read and write. Enjoyed

Nightshade
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17 posted 2002-05-04 07:29 PM


Very tender and enjoyable. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

BloomingRose
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18 posted 2002-05-04 07:58 PM


That's what sweet dreams are made of!
Enjoyed the read.

Deb

SmittenKitten
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19 posted 2002-05-05 09:54 PM



Sy, Chris and Deb, thank you so much for stopping in and leaving me your kind thoughts!   *hugs to all of you*

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Janet Marie
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20 posted 2002-05-06 08:25 AM


I whisper into his heart
and tickle his soul
Linger on his lips
kiss the tips of his toes
Map all his freckles
and count all his scars
Trace his ear lobes
and touch nose to nose

Soul visiting soul
it replays every night
Every sigh, every touch
in my dreams I'm in love

=================================

this is so soft spoken and lovely...
such tender words of longing wrapped up in a dream theme..an "eye sigh" for sure
Welcome back girlie!!...so good to see your name here again!!
This is a ethereal beauty poetess Krista!

... and I don't know why ...
Why should love come down and just sweep me away
I want to fly ... but there are so many things in my way.

J Browne

Bill Charles
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21 posted 2002-05-06 04:38 PM


SmittenKitten - beautiful words you write about your dreams. Sometimes they come true..

BC

Aimster
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22 posted 2002-05-06 06:14 PM


krista~

this is such a beautiful write...full
of so much hope and longing... i hope
your dreams resolve into reality, here
is hoping all your dreams come true. a
very beautiful piece you've penned...
take care.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

SmittenKitten
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where the sky and horizon meet
23 posted 2002-05-06 10:58 PM



JM~ An "eye sigh"   I like that.  
Thank you so much for your lovely compliments, you always leave me beaming!  And it is great to be back amongst the kindness of poets like yourself!  *hugs*

Bill~ Thank you...I hold onto that hope!

Amy~ Thank you sweet poetess, you hug with your words

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Duncan
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24 posted 2002-05-07 12:10 PM


Good dream...don't lose it.
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