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lucky
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0 posted 2002-05-02 09:51 PM



have you ever known
the heartbeat of loneliness wrapped
in the silence of a reminisce and it hurts
too much to ponder & it’s hard to weigh
the morrow or change today the way

you feel haven't you felt the
force of thunder or
saw a zephyr
blowing
soarin'
through
the tarnished
stillness at the same

time your listening to your
spirit & it’s crying right out
loud your mind can’t walk
beside or take away the
pain while you
shudder

in
confusion
honest if you try
haven't you ever cried
running through the hollows
nigh to sounding shadows & you
desire an early grave haven't you
been tainted with any colour

gray

Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am.
To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight.
-Marge Tindal


© Copyright 2002 Dale W. Gwaltney - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-05-02 10:02 PM


Lucky~
I have ... I have~

This is so YOU ... and so beautifully presented~

I miss ya' fella~
Much love to you and family~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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2 posted 2002-05-03 12:20 PM




(sigh) I think every now and then we can be dappled in so many different colors that resemble our various moods, sweet friend, I used to yearn for that grave all the time and resign myself until finally I learned to appreciate the simple pleasures of life and now I see blue in the skies always! (sigh) This is so very well-detailed, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dale, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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