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Take me to this place.................
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Take me to this place................. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Take me to this place… How best to comply? It is not simple, wanting you here with me, where they say simply, harvest will be early this June anticipating ever green growth of heads already bending with mass from which will spring more than bread and cakes, noodles and beer how best to describe how gold floats, rustling like a fine church dress, calling to the man and woman this is your cathedral today… how best to comply? Somehow, if you open your arms wide, lift your face to the sun, close your eyes, sway with the wind, let the heat permeate your spirit, your feet will lift from the ground your arms will feel stretched your spirit, refreshed, and you will grow and glow like gold. She asked, take me to this place I am trying, and someday I may succeed. ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 2 May 2002 ~*~ Dedicated to Nightshade |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"this is your cathedral today…" oh my minds eye loves the pictures you paint for me  |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Karilea, I've seen this place and you describe it well! Nice... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"She asked, take me to this place I am trying, and someday I may succeed."  (smiles) This is absolutely beautiful, sweet friend, I just know Chris will always cherish this and with her, you both will find your place in the sun and soar off the soles of your shoes and find peace and grace always! (kiss on cheek) This is superb, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Sunshine - Awwwwww....how sweet of you to dedicate this lovely poem to me. Yes, yes, I believe that if I stretch my arms really wide and tilt back my face to the sun...yes..twirling...whirling.......paradise!!!!!!!! Thankyou sweet poetess! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ooops! I was so busy spinning and taking in the beauty...I forgot to add this to my library! Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
The softness of a poetic Kansas Lady, penned eloquently upon the pages blue! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Somehow, if you open your arms wide, lift your face to the sun, close your eyes, sway with the wind, let the heat permeate your spirit, your feet will lift from the ground your arms will feel stretched your spirit, refreshed, and you will grow and glow like gold. She asked, take me to this place I am trying, and someday I may succeed. =============================== trust me dear poetess of the sun... you succeeded...you took us there...and its very very warm.  ... and I don't know why ... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ This is so softly lovely~ I think Dorothy had to only click those Ruby-Reds to get there ... you did it in beautiful inking~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karilea, how so very much like you to dedicate this piece to my sweet sister. How lovely and uplifting it reads... Enjoyed so much and into my library it goes as well. Thank you dear poetess. ~Hugs~ |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Karilea, You do Kansas proud! Luv-- Shenachie |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea You sure took me...this was poetic perfection! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You just continue to make me smile |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
That was so great. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Been there..but this was even more beautiful..than the largest quilted wheat field, outlined with sunflowers, meeting those flint hills..because you dedicated the sky to a friend..Precious you. Sincerely, Reg |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
"with arms wide open" in a field of golden wheat 'neath an autumn sun I am born again thanks, coyote |
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alterego Member
since 2002-02-23
Posts 113Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
 "how best to describe how gold floats," Like fairy dust.... This is really spiritual.... so ethereal And reminds me that summer is coming, I can almost smell the fragrances.. Very well done. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Somehow, if you open your arms wide, lift your face to the sun, close your eyes, sway with the wind, let the heat permeate your spirit, your feet will lift from the ground your arms will feel stretched your spirit, refreshed, ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Lovely imagery that gently lifts the spirit. Enjoyed. Deb |
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