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Clouding.....(inspired by bsquirrel)
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Clouding.....(inspired by bsquirrel) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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With a kiss I clouded over And he didn’t even try He took the rain Before it fell from my sky There the sun shone through Peeking The rays stretched out to touch Seeking Thunder rolled, in the quaking Where mountains and clouds meet Then he let it rain So I fell, in puddles, at his feet Bathing him in my waters To sooth his psyche Saturate with the essence The very soul of me And in my falling He marveled at my bliss So unaware of the power Held in his kiss ~SEA~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Susan, You made a puddle out of me! Lovely.  It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Bathing him in my waters To sooth his psyche Saturate with the essence The very soul of me"  (smiles) WOW!!! Oh my gosh, this is absolutely beautiful, sweet friend, may love forever cloud your heart with rain that sings to your heart and may his whispers forever saturate your heart with joy and rapture! (kiss on cheek) Your inspirations are endless, sweet friend, this is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Larry, Noah, you guys are so awesome, thank you |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
With a kiss I clouded over And he didn't even try He took the rain Before it fell from my sky ============================== Bathing him in my waters To sooth his psyche Saturate with the essence The very soul of me ============================== anyone who knows much about you, knows your love of the rain....and how it effects you.... and this?....this poem has been waiting for you to write it for a long long time. Trust me when I tell you it was worth the wait. Your muse is smiling at this and the one posted before it....so am I.  |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Janet, thank you sweet friend |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
As the ages pass, and all is lost about this life, a researcher can find this someday and say "Wow! That SEA was one awesome poet." And as a bonus, my name will be tagged in! Thank you for this. I'm humbled to give yr muse music. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mike, I am so glad you are posting again Thank you for the inspire |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
With a kiss I clouded over And he didn’t even try He took the rain Before it fell from my sky ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sue..knowing how much you love the rain... this is SO you! And, also like you, very beautiful! ~Hugs~ |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
It's so you...perfect. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ What a beautifully inspired piece~ You worked it so well ... it's a delightful read~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Powerful emotion, powerful words!!!! Your writing is always outstanding. ***Ivy Rose |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
YOWSA!!! This is great, SEA!! You're amazing when you write like this..  |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Nancy, thank you!! Cowboy, Marge, that is very nice of you, thank you Ivy, wow  thank you!Balladeer, that is so great, thank you! |
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