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Larry C
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0 posted 2002-05-02 05:23 PM



Double Fun
By Barry & Larry


Time for boys to do a duet
So ladies, just sit back, don’t fret
For Larry and Barry give you
a laugh and a chuckle or two


We’ve been doing it individually
Thought we’d double our hilarity
Two for the price of one
Buckle up for some fun

Now Larry, I want you to know
that under the moon I won’t go
My heart isn’t yours gonna keep
and off my feet soft words won’t sweep


Well Barry, that’s really too bad
You’ve misunderstood dear lad
It was intended to be a double date
But it seems you misunderstood the bait

You know I envy you for hair
cause the top of my head is bare
If you will give a lock or two
Send you these words, yes I will do


Lucky for you I got a head start
So with some hair I can part
But girls love guys without hair
It gives you an advantage so unfair

A girl I assure you I am not
and words I’ve written won’t be hot
I’ll send some passages from pen
and hurry up, the hair is thin


You’re ill equipped to be mistaken
For a girl you could not be taken
I emailed some hair it’s on the way
So is there a chance of a double date today?

May 2, 2002

Thanks Barry for the FUN!


It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

[This message has been edited by Larry C (05-02-2002 07:02 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Larry Chadwick - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-05-02 05:29 PM


Larry...you're cheating on me!!  ROFL
Great duet, guys.  Love the hair bit.

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2 posted 2002-05-02 05:43 PM




(giggles in delight) Oh Larry and Barry, whatever are we going to do with you, this cracked me up! (smiles) You two make such fine entertainers together, sweet friend, did you download the hair yet? LOL! This is absolutely wonderful, sweet friends, you make such a wonderful poetic team, we all love you so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Larry and Barry (I like how your names rhyme too, LOL), thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Krissy
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3 posted 2002-05-02 05:47 PM


Larry and Magnus my two favourite poetic men, this is wonderful, written with a lot of laughter and fun. I can feel it here. Magnus you don’t need any hair you are simply gorgeous without it, and Larry you don’t need anything to make you simply scrummy. Naturally I’m writing about your poetry, you both believe me don’t you?

Excellent work, I love this one, do another soon this is splendid

And I get to answer before mum again, that's extra points to me


Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Titia Geertman
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4 posted 2002-05-02 05:56 PM



When's the next one to be published???

LOL you gave me a good smiling here.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

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5 posted 2002-05-02 06:13 PM


OH Larry.....I am ROTFLMAO today....for sure.
This turned out to be totally hilarious...

Thanx for asking me,  I did enjoy this,
and I am enjoying it....It was great,
thanx!!!

Larry C
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6 posted 2002-05-02 06:28 PM


Duncan,
But at least I'm not doing it behind your back! LOL And thanks.

Noah,
Haven't heard if he got it yet! LOL And thanks.

Krissy,
Just like your mom, you are so kind! Thanks sweetie. We had fun.

Titia,
You had that smiling coming! LOL And thanks.

Barry,
As I recall...it was your idea. You'redahman! Thanks this was a ton of fun.

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

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7 posted 2002-05-02 06:58 PM


Larry & Barry...the comedy duo of Passions!
Who would have thunk it?!
You guys are just too much!
Very very well done!
~Hugs to you both~

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8 posted 2002-05-02 07:07 PM


Larry & Barry - I can picture the two of you on stage, vaudevillian style.....hoofin' off stage-left, sequined bow ties glinting under the bright lights. Well done. lol. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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9 posted 2002-05-02 07:23 PM


Larry,  I wanted to say
I got the hair you sent
But geez, about the gray
and such a funky scent!

I wanted straight and fine
not curly, bent and coarse
It came in late offline
Was not Fedex your horse?

I guess I'll just paste
and hope it sticks to me
I'll take time, not haste
with your hair...Larry C!

Thanx Guy....enjoyed...

[This message has been edited by Magnus (05-02-2002 07:24 PM).]

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10 posted 2002-05-02 07:26 PM


Larry and Barry

You are both so cute and clever
it matters not if hair or feather
cause your hearts are sweetest heather
your words a laugh when said together.

Much enjoyed, you two!

Larry C
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11 posted 2002-05-02 07:46 PM


Nancy Lee,
LOL Glad we could entertain! Thanks we had fun.

Chris,
If only I had that much talent...sounds so fun. Thanks.

Barry,
Oh, I find it so appalling,
FedEx was just done calling.
They made a mistake of course,
What you got came from a horse!

You're too darn funny... Thanks for so much fun.

Martie,
For the ladies we did play
Giving smiles for today.
Kind responses are a plus,
Bringing pleasure to both of us.

Thanks.

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

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12 posted 2002-05-02 10:21 PM


You two are hilarious.
Thanks for the cheer.
Sandra

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13 posted 2002-05-02 11:10 PM


You guys are too much!!!!  This was hilarious!!!  Great duet.  Some spectacular male bonding going on here. (No pun intended)


***Ivy Rose

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14 posted 2002-05-02 11:54 PM


Magnus...the hair you got was curly and bent? Well, he never said it came from his head!

You guys are terrific!

Larry C
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15 posted 2002-05-03 12:41 PM


Sandra,
Anything to help. Thanks it was our pleasure.

***Ivy Rose,
Glad you enjoyed. Thanks.

'Deer,
ROTFLMBO Fat chance...but nice try! Thanks.

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

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16 posted 2002-05-03 09:58 AM


Larry and Barry, thank you for this. I sure needed something humorous today. This is great. More please.
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17 posted 2002-05-03 10:03 AM


You just doubled my pleasure

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18 posted 2002-05-03 10:08 AM


enjoyed it a lot
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19 posted 2002-05-03 10:51 AM


Wow Barry~ and Larry~
This is a grand duet....packed with muh humor and fun...so refreshing....


Lauren~

I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings
Could I have been anyone other than me
True poems rest between the words
I'd rather laugh with the sinners

Larry C
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20 posted 2002-05-03 12:45 PM


SmartChick,
Glad we were just in time. Thanks.

Interloper,
So the theory was right. Cool. Thanks.

vandana,
We're so glad. And thanks.

Lauren,
Well...you know Barry! LOL Thanks.

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

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