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Heartbeats Courageous by ThisDiamond & Bill Charles
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Heartbeats Courageous by ThisDiamond & Bill Charles |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“HEARTBEATS COURAGEOUS” by ThisDiamond & Bill Charles A life lived wide and wondrous Equal of courage and fear When pain is the deepest of teacher And love lends the softest of ear To live within eyes wide and open Dreaming of things deep to be When thoughts are of only misery Your love does its cleansing of me In the heart dance wild and wanton In the heart seek throaty and slow When destiny calls in the molten And the wheel turns to drive where we go One with a heart fragile and gentle With whispers of romance for you The moonlight will shine on both There be something inside felt anew A life lived in fullest of meter Escaping our grasp and our will Two hearts beat in rhythm much sweeter Founding surely the dreams we fulfill Two lives together just wanting a chance My touch to yours I offer you my hand Two rhythms will surely beat as one As we embrace into this safe dreamland ~~~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  YAY!!! Oh my gosh, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you two make such a wonderful team together! (BIG HUGGSSSSSS) May you both escape into your own dreamands and find true happiness with your true loves, sweet friend, this is wonderful, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Hey you two....This is perfectly soft and sensual, and so very well written together. Very nicely done!!!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
ThisDiamond and Bill... Perfectly beautiful duet! Blended so well together...loved the flow. Enjoyed so very much this lazy afternoon. ~Hugs to you both!~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
TD & Bill, Nancy Lee is right. This blends extremely well. A nice romantic write seeming to demand another. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful flow of words...James |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Way to go fine poets!! Enjoyed this duet very much. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. [This message has been edited by Nightshade (05-02-2002 07:10 PM).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Congratulations you two |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You did a sensational job here BC...I love it! ThisDiamond |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
To All, Thank you all for your warm replies. ThisDiamond, your words were very inspirational, thank you for writing this together... BC |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill and this diamond darling hearts, I really love this poem it is UTTERLY utterly fabulous. You are both absolutely fabulous writers I love the way it flows with wonder and the voice within. And yes I love it utterly. Truly exceptional writing from you both. My how well you two write together, do some more please soon    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Very beautiful and romantic...much enjoyed duet! Thanks! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very nicely done and such a warm open piece...beautiful duet! |
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