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lucky
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0 posted 2002-05-02 02:23 PM


in sleepy slumber I
run to hide where message is
hidden behind closed eyes while
another day goes by and I don’t
understand reasons why I’m
taken by the zephyr and
like the wheat
blown
in
wind
and all the
chafe times as faces of
love drifted and shifted to places
somewhere gone I want to leave an innuendo
in the tree covered dales with seasons I want to think
there’s a reason I counted all the tears when the years
were lone and everything in my heart was dark and
no one could read or listen and there was
nothing to write it on


Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am.
To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight.
-Marge Tindal


© Copyright 2002 Dale W. Gwaltney - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-05-02 02:25 PM


You don't have to worry about writing innuendos -- even the shape and structure of this piece is one. Loved it.
Martie
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2 posted 2002-05-02 08:12 PM


Dale

You always touch my heart!

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3 posted 2002-05-02 08:49 PM




(sigh) I just love your wonderful unique style of writing, sweet friend, I ust love how your words funnel into a tornado of emotions that spill all across these pages! (big hugggsssssss) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dale, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-05-03 08:50 AM


Lucky~

LOVE THIS !

'like the wheat
blown
in
wind
and all the
chafe times as faces of
love drifted and shifted to places
somewhere gone I want to leave an innuendo
in the tree covered dales with seasons I want to think
there’s a reason I counted all the tears when the years
were lone and everything in my heart was dark and
no one could read or listen and there was
nothing to write it on'


I am sure your message was written on the wind many times ...
and has blown home on the next breeze~
Love you ... miss you~
My regards always to Rosemary and the family~

*Neat signature, by the way ~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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