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. . . paradise awaits . . .
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. . . paradise awaits . . . |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
please don't say goodbye we shall meet again later paradise awaits Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (05-02-2002 01:51 PM).] |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
These words could be deciphered in numerous ways, but my first thought was of a loved one dying and being told not to worry ~ that we will meet in heaven later. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I like that this poem has many different meanings, depending on the reader's temperment. |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Bob *big kiss* this is beautiful really beautiful Look into my eyes see love Shining just for you Exquisite writing Bob you are a fabulous and skilled writter   Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ Paradise awaits Half-turning of heart to stay Never say goodbye~ You are sooooooo good at inspiring~ *Hugs*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Interloper~ awww, goodbyes are so hard to say sometimes....very touching... Lauren~ ~Sinking fast into |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
....just say Adios or better yet, Aloha... to keep the promise |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Opeth ~ Awright  I will write and you can say what it means to you ... that's as it should be.bsquirrel ~ yup. Thanx for the read. Krissy ~ I've been called a critter before but never a skilled writter I love your senryu. Marge ~ Whatever service I can provide ... I try Greeneyes ~ If I've touched you then I have done my work. Thank you. Sunshine ~ yes, aloha is best Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Au revoir, mon ami. Later, gator. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Somehow this feels comforting, as I just said a final goobye to a loved one yesterday. Sandra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Interloper...you have touched me and therefore have done your work. ~Warm Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Kacey ~ I love it when you talk dirty Sandra ~ Thank you darlin' Nancy ~ Where's your sister? Send her back already? I love ya both! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Aloha, my love In case I don't see you soon Good morning and good night  (sigh) Saying goodbye is indeed such a heart thing to do, sweet friend, I wish for love to forever bade you welcome and bring stillness to your heart forever and ever! (smiles) This is excellent and heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank yo for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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