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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2002-05-02 12:07 PM

Somehow the dance does call to me
through dreary life and misery
it beckons-come, you shall be free
to live life full through harmony.

I dance alone under the moon
I dance the dream of coming soon
I dance obsessed to my own tune
within my heart, I hear him croon.

Still yearning more than solo dance
I crave the touch of true romance
and spin myself into a trance
though hand in mine would so enhance.

The drum beats louder in my head
my body, heart and soul are wed.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-05-02 12:10 PM

(smiles) And I know deep down with all my heart soon your heart will be drumming with pure happiness and true love! (kiss on cheek) This is such a powerful yearning, sweet friend, I wish all this joy to come true for you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!

May love and light alwyas shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2002-05-02 12:43 PM

Sandra - go ahead..dance...even if there is no music...so what if you haven't any partner?!! To dance gives our souls joy. Well done. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

3 posted 2002-05-02 12:50 PM

I crave the touch of true romance ...
         ... TOUCHING!!!
        Never enough moonlight,
             never enough time,
                  always you.
                       *s

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2002-05-02 12:50 PM

Still yearning more than solo dance
I crave the touch of true romance
and spin myself into a trance
though hand in mine would so enhance.

The drum beats louder in my head
my body, heart and soul are wed.
==============================

your touching expressions of longing are enhanced by your gift of cadence.
Lovely poetic phrasing in this bittersweet beauty Poetess Cat.
jm

... and I don't know why ...
Why should love come down and just sweep me away
I want to fly ... but there are so many things in my way.

J Browne

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2002-05-02 12:52 PM

CatalinaMoon~
I feel the rhythm in your feet~

'I crave the touch of true romance
and spin myself into a trance
though hand in mine would so enhance'

Amen !
Grab the next person you see and twirl them around ...
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

6 posted 2002-05-02 01:12 PM

Wow... That was achingly good. (key word is ache)

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

7 posted 2002-05-02 01:30 PM

Still yearning more than solo dance
I crave the touch of true romance
and spin myself into a trance
though hand in mine would so enhance.

Your poetic dreaming is beautiful, Sandra. I hope it all comes true for you soon.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2002-05-02 03:07 PM

I love this Sandra as I love to dance...
with or without a partner... *S*

Dance through your days and be happy..
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2002-05-02 03:09 PM

a perfect write of feelings true
of which I know so well

*s

hugsss
M

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2002-05-02 04:21 PM

reading this, I'm reminded of the book "Sweat Your Prayers". . . it's the same idea. . .

wonderful Sandra. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

11 posted 2002-05-02 04:26 PM

Sandra, do not ever allow anyone to say you
a not a writer of excellent poetry....

This is beautiful...dance away!!

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

12 posted 2002-05-03 08:30 AM

Dear Sandra, this is beautiful, I wish that I would have written it myself.
You brought the moment into view, I could see the tears in your eyes as you danced the night away alone.

Sincerely Rick.

Wonderful poetry.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

13 posted 2002-05-03 09:19 AM

Sandra, this is just beautiful. Your poetry is such a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing it.

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

14 posted 2002-05-03 10:42 AM

"Still yearning more than solo dance
I crave the touch of true romance
and spin myself into a trance
though hand in mine would so enhance."

Sandra~ I do this dance as well...your cadence is perfect poetess, and the rhyme enhances each line. There is power in your writing.

*hugs*
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

15 posted 2002-05-03 10:56 AM

Sandra, you just get better and better ... even with your sadness.
I love this piece.
I prescribe a waltz, then a two-step, and, finally, a buckle polisher

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