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Who Are You Anyway
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Who Are You Anyway |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Who are you anyway, when I catch your words across the blue, I see the you that is in me and visa-versa, sometimes three. I see the sometimes pity me wanna be attention need that forms the cartoon like balloons that float above my mind to see. Who are you anyway, I've noticed you in other forms, sometimes in ease and feeling warm and other times I squirm in fear wondering why these words appear and self destruct in front of me and set my sights for all to see. I'm rambling on sometimes like you, the mirror raises thoughts of two together arms enjoined in share who are you anyway and where is all that should be, can be had to make the good from all the bad. I wonder why I write like this instead of showing off my glad. Because today the rain is me the pouring out, the pain to free. Who are you anyway to be but words across this blue of sea. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, A lovely write, enjoyed the read. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you Sy, I think I am going to pull weeds this morning, maybe I need some weeding myself... *s M |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
M, a wonderful write from you sweet friend...just really lovely! take care. amy  "you can't stop |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Maureen hi there this is so full of depth and wonder I feel this talking to my soul. I love this, really good writing here. Very well written   Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
I felt as if you were speaking directly to me and to others who partake in this forum. I will answer your question. I am Opeth, otherwise known as Mike. Well done, made me think. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WynterGal~ A downpour of wonderfully poetic thoughts~ You have a knack for doing a refreshing purge~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Loved "this blue of sea." |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Enjoyed the read, this is thought evoking |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, your words are always so thoughtful and provoking, I LOVE IT! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may this soft ocean of peace always fill your heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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painted lady Junior Member
since 2001-04-01
Posts 48on the wing or nectaring |
Ahhh, the question . . . Always more important than the answer. Enjoyed this read, I did. And then my heart with pleasure fills, |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I've asked this quetion so many times Maureen, and always the answer is somewhat vague, but endearing nevertheless. You release your words and let them fly,....they truly soar in their own right! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Who are you anyway." Sometimes when you think you know someone you realize that you don't know them at all...it could take a lifetime...James |
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