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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2002-05-02 08:58 AM

tiny lilacs
mysteries
dark secrets
in disguise of light
hyacinth
within the mind
in greedy breed
becoming blight...

a shadow
in the sun
shines grow
remember
what we
used to know...

a sunbeam clean
in evergreen,
and every fern
is leaf in growth,
a yearning furled
unto itself--
like fingers curled,

as if they know...

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-05-02 09:04 AM

Serenity,
as if they know...Lovely.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2002-05-02 09:15 AM

this is so beautiful

not sure I know

but I enjoyed just the same

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2002-05-02 10:44 AM

is leaf in growth,
a yearning furled
unto itself--
like fingers curled

it is amazing what we gain with time.....this is great Karen....hugsssss to you...

Lauren~

~Sinking fast into
an ocean of you,
what if I told you,
what if I said
that I love you
do we dare cross
that line between your
heart and mine~

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2002-05-02 11:09 AM

remember
what we
used to know...

a sunbeam clean
in evergreen,
and every fern
is leaf in growth,
a yearning furled
unto itself--
like fingers curled,

as if they know...
========================

they know...and? they know that you know that I know that you know

and I love knowing what you know...love reading what you know too..love the imagery in this as well...
bet you were barefoot and diggin in the dirt again.

... and I don't know why ...
Why should love come down and just sweep me away
I want to fly ... but there are so many things in my way.

J Browne

Krissy
Senior Member

since 2002-02-22

Posts 556
kent England

5 posted 2002-05-02 11:15 AM

Serenity Hi there this is so beautiful the imagery in this is superb, it really does take you into the poem, I love this one you are a very good writer

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2002-05-02 11:16 AM

some of the best smoke I ever had..
but I didn't inhale (grin)

enjoyed it ms serene...lovely images

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

7 posted 2002-05-02 12:09 PM

serenity,

this was a lovely write...and what you
know and what you write that you know
is so wonderful...keep knowing and please
keep writing us your wonderful poems...
heartfelt and from the heart, this was.
take care.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

8 posted 2002-05-02 01:39 PM

Planty! I wanna walk in th' forest with y'.

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (05-02-2002 04:03 PM).]

Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

9 posted 2002-05-02 03:46 PM

as if they know what? elucidate please.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2002-05-02 04:17 PM

I would say. . .let them keep guessing. . .

wonderful. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

11 posted 2002-05-02 04:41 PM

Karen,
If you're taking a poll...I'm with Sven. Good write, again.

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

12 posted 2002-05-02 04:59 PM

Karen, fantastic write with great imagery!
Love the way you express yourself.
~Hugs~

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

13 posted 2002-05-02 05:11 PM

This is 1derful but I gotta ask .... as if they know what?

Whaddaya want? I'm only a man!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

14 posted 2002-05-02 05:54 PM

(sigh) I wasn't too sure either, but it appeared to me like a harbinger of spring re-fashioning that was long forgotten during the winter that comes back to greet us once more with the flowers of joy and hope! (big hugggssssss) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

15 posted 2002-05-02 10:28 PM

Liking your style, as usual. This is great.
Sandra

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

16 posted 2002-05-02 10:39 PM

Serenity~ Love your images K

and the flow of your rhyme as well.

*hugs*
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

17 posted 2002-05-02 11:00 PM

I am one tired and sleepy witch tonight...but it's a good tired, yanno?

Thank you all so much for replying to my little muse of spring....and thanks for replying AS IF YA KNEW...LOL...

I couldn't help but notice that the only ones who asked were the guys---surprising! I thought men would appreciate the beauty of an "open end"---roflmao now

Men...hmmm..gotta love 'em! (What else would we do with 'em?)