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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 05-02-2002 06:02 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Stranger

you were flowers growing in sky meadows
there were no clouds or wind
I was there with my eyes
and didn't leave prints with touch feet

I made you poems from twigs and string
you tied them in your hair
and whispered little girl sounds
with your laughing eye mouth

you sang to me when we ate berries
and carved our initials there
on my back skin
with your wet finger knife

we made heart shapes with our breath
and linked them into each other
we said kisses would them metal
and they could never float away

and we kissed until they were heavy iron love


İdark

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 05-02-2002 06:05 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

you tied them in your hair
and whispered little girl sounds
with your laughing eye mouth


and just by this verse alone, I can tell...you know the arts of love.

smiling
Dark Stranger
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2 posted 05-02-2002 06:11 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms serene...thank you ms....would always do my best over and over until it was perfect..
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3 posted 05-02-2002 08:34 AM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel



(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love both the innocent and passionate feel of this poem, sweet friend, this is a wonderful meadow serenade! (big hugggssssss) May true love always fill your heart with a faith that be cast with iron, sweet friend, we all love you so much, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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Somewhere in time~


4 posted 05-02-2002 08:53 AM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Dang!  This is incredible.
...and good morning to you too Dark.
~sighs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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Dark Stranger
Your moans have over tones, enjoyed
Dark Stranger
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6 posted 05-02-2002 09:18 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

Noah, thank you my friend

Nancy, slow hugs for your sweet words

Sy, bless you amigo, I appreciate you
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with you


7 posted 05-02-2002 09:19 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

"we made heart shapes with our breath
and linked them into each other"

I think that is so completely COOL!
wow, love the image that brings....
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just out of reach


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and carved our initials there
on my back skin
with your wet finger knife

Dark Stranger...well now, I think I might be without words at the moment...maybe not....WOW!!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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DS

"we made heart shapes with our breath
and linked them into each other
we said kisses would them metal
and they could never float away

and we kissed until they were heavy iron love"

Such a wonderful thought!  

Dark Stranger
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10 posted 05-02-2002 09:59 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

SEA...thanks babe..have missed you

Nightshade, wink, just picking the right words perhaps?  Thank you so much ms

Ms Martie, thanks lil friend for your lady eyes

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (05-02-2002 10:30 AM).]

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Between the Lines


11 posted 05-02-2002 10:19 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

some lovely blends of images here D...

M
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Listening to every heart


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This touches to a depth
only mermen know

this, sir, is a spectacular write,
and a Keeper of the first sort...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.

Dark Stranger
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NT, thanks maureen, pleased that you enjoyed it.

Sunshine, Good Morning, and yes there is a story about me breathing underwater in another life...thanks lady..
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When you are ready
you will relate it
poetic or prose
will do fine
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Enjoyed.
Indigo
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pressed for time
they steamed love's fabric smooth
till one of them,
smiling wickedly,
wrinkled it up again


Indigo
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17 posted 05-02-2002 04:23 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

BSQ, thanks my friend

Indigo, they say if it stays wet
it won't wrinkle
supposed to apply to
most any fabric

thanks babe
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Sinfully sensuous.
Sandra
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"I made you poems from twigs and string
you tied them in your hair
and whispered little girl sounds
with your laughing eye mouth"


pebbles tumble a giggle
as we tickle them with our toes
the sunlight dances in our eyes
as we touch nose to nose

I love the scenery you evoke and how you integrate it into your characters...you are one cool guy DS   

*hugs*
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

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20 posted 05-02-2002 10:34 PM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

You are an artist Ds,
mind if I smile.....

Like a red brick,
in a white wall
somebodies brush
forgot to paint...
lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..)

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DarkStranger~
Word-silk, woven into it's finest bartering fabric~
Sheer pleasure~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Love is the berries, when it's done right!
I liked the soft and hard combination in this! Nice touch DS~
Dark Stranger
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23 posted 05-03-2002 06:03 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

Sandra, thank you so much ms catmoon

SmittyKitty, slow hugs for your sweet touch

Donna, bless your eyes lady friend

Marge, thank you lovely poetess

Bluez, so berry nice of you to visit and sweeten up things  thank you
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Dark, honey...i believe you are heavy iron love... And you just get better.

Sincerely,
Reg
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