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JamesBowie
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big old Bangor Maine up by the shack

0 posted 2002-05-01 09:44 PM


While the slow burning campfire embers fade
swiftly to ash, long tendrils of swirling smoke
drift upwards to mingle and disperse among
the dried mid-winter leaves that dance about
on the skeletal limbs of bare tree branches

A cold north wind turns it's bitter face towards
the frozen snow covered lake, whipping up
tiny swirling snow devils, that spin about
and come to rest in a snow drift, gathering
upon the boundaries of a freshly plowed road

Far from the fire, pawprints outline the path
taken by a slinking grey fox, that slows to listen
to the sounds of a shrew beneath the layered snow,
busily gathering the succulent roots of dormant
grass to tide it through the harsh winter season

As wind passes from lofty frosted heights,
it falls quickly as if weighted, bringing with it
a bitter nip of cold, forcing me to pull closed
my winter parka as I sip a thermos of hot cocoa
that warms me, in the midst of winter



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Larry C
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1 posted 2002-05-01 09:49 PM


James,
My kind of camping. But my fire would be blazing. Nice write.

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

bsquirrel
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2 posted 2002-05-02 02:59 PM


And AGAIN you make me think of New Hampshire! Sheesh.
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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2002-05-03 01:06 PM


A comfortable place to be

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