navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #20 » Matrix
Open Poetry #20
Post A Reply Post New Topic Matrix Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Casanova
Junior Member
since 1999-06-21
Posts 48
Mays Landing NJ

0 posted 2002-05-01 06:31 PM


The true you,
Is shining through,
Displaying itself,
In what you do.

Don't let it hide,
Somwhere inside,
Just show yourself,
With growing pride,

For It's hid to long,
And that was wrong,
For only self,
Can Keep you strong!

Matrix: (n) Somthing within which, something else Originates, Develops, or is contained.

© Copyright 2002 Daniel R. Cuellar - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia
1 posted 2002-05-01 11:20 PM


Yes, let the true you shine through. Good thoughts here, Casanova.
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2002-05-02 05:47 AM


So this is what the movie was about...James
bsquirrel
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855

3 posted 2002-05-02 02:30 PM


I enjoyed that.
Suetang
Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
4 posted 2002-05-02 05:41 PM


Hello Cas

Your words spoke so many truths and I could relate so very well.  I have exposed my inner soul through my writing and it is such a wonderful feeling to be able to put feelings into words.  I've only been writing for just over a year and until then I had never put pen to paper, not even in my youth. I believe the death of my father caused me to expose my feelings in more ways than one through my writing, 'tho there are still so many who don't even know I write.  I don't feel comfortable telling some people and exposing my soul to them as I don't know what they'd think? I hope your writing gives you much happiness.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

Mistletoe Angel
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
5 posted 2002-05-02 05:45 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Yes, yes, it is our love and faith in ourselves that makes magic happen, let us always be true to ourselves and never let anyone change who you are, for you are a very special person and friend to us all! (big hugggssssss) This is absolutely wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Daniel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #20 » Matrix

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary