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Open Poetry #20

I'm Just A Man

Hallucination
Member

since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

0 posted 2002-05-01 04:21 PM

I'm Just A Man,
Behind Glass Eyes.
Feeling Trapped, Slayed,
Breathing Black Lies.
Quite, Deeply...

I'm Just A Man,
Lost Deep Inside.
To The Shadows,
Walking The Night.
Sad And Empty...

Watching A Rain Cloud Form High,
Up In Another Man's Sky.
While Sitting On A Hill Side,
Feeling My Own Soil Bag Dry.

I'm Just A Man,
Who Never Dreams.
Who Is Always
Stuck In The Stream.
Cold And Hollow...

I'm Just A Man,
Playing My Part.
Within This World,
All Filled With Scars.
Lost In Sorrow...

Watching A Rain Cloud Form High,
Up In Another Man's Sky.
While Sitting On A Hill Side,
Feeling My Own Soil Bag Dry.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2002-05-01 05:08 PM

yes. . . this is a mirror that I've been looking in for quite a while. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

2 posted 2002-05-01 06:02 PM

damn I like this!!!

Be glad you aren't a girl...us girls never get to do much without someone trying to overprotect us from life.

Hallucination
Member

since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

3 posted 2002-05-01 06:21 PM

Hi Sven & Rose...
Thanks alot for the read and comments on this one...I'm thinking about putting music to it. I don't know how would go yet...But we'll see...Thanks again guys...

Best Wishes,

brian.

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