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Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

0 posted 2002-05-01 01:10 PM

Traces

finer than lines
of a finger’s
print

imperceptible but
for the sound

of shhhhhhhh

lay back
feign the moment

that my residue

finds itself

in your
musings

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

1 posted 2002-05-01 01:19 PM

Wow, how clever and true of many!

Shine on, Deca, me likes the way you write!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

2 posted 2002-05-01 01:23 PM

Decaflame,
Your title drew me in. Pun intended. Awesome write. I like the images this creates.

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2002-05-01 01:59 PM

ms deca,
me thinks there is naughty
in this...enjoyed the edges of it

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

4 posted 2002-05-01 02:05 PM

Yumaholic. (that's good, ah suppose)

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

5 posted 2002-05-01 03:38 PM

Deca darling girl this is incredible writing, absolutely outstandingly good. I truly love this diamond from you. Utterly utterly amazing writing it’s so full of beauty you are an amazing writer, truly awesome writing here

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-05-01 04:23 PM

Ah yes...very sultry Deca!

And so much enjoyed!
~hugs~

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

7 posted 2002-05-01 10:26 PM

sultry...succinct...sexy...superb

*sigh*

"that my residue

finds itself

in your
musings"
whew...residue just took on a whole new meaning. *wink* *L*
this one shall reside in me library..thank you so much!!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2002-05-01 10:33 PM

Ditto on Janet Marie and Nancy's comments...
Me thinks that about sums up how the words
feel....

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