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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2002-05-01 06:39 AM


Woman I Adore

~I remember~
the last woman
I fell in love with.
Honey it was you.

~You were~
so beautiful.
..I could barely..
believe my eyes.

~Honey~
I loved to
look at you.

Now some time
has passed us by.
And I love you
~even more~
now that I can
believe my eyes

~when I gaze upon~
the woman
I adore.

JamesLee
May01
2002


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Kethry
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1 posted 2002-05-01 07:20 AM


James,
lovely sentiment, lovely poem.

Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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2 posted 2002-05-01 08:37 AM




(smiles) Awwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your lovely words are always destined to melt her heart forever, as you will always be the one she'll adore! (big hugggssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sunnyone
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3 posted 2002-05-01 09:55 AM



she is very lucky, and you express yourself so beautifully....loved it!

The music is playing...the dance begins
  
    


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4 posted 2002-05-01 09:57 AM


Sounds like you are very lucky people.  
Well done!

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