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Come Undone
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Come Undone |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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Hey there Stranger What lies in your mystery? Romance Danger So much secrets offer me Can you Give me All the warmth of my distraction I need To free Myself from this chain reaction Late nights Own me Hours up within the silence Quiet Lonely Thinking is a form of violence Some day I’ll be Happy with what I’ve become Till then File me Under people come undone |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Kevin, I LOVE this one! Very clever I must say, and yes I would say that thinking is a form of violence, never thought of it till you said it but I do now. Here's to your soon being happy  |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Welcome Home Kevin...as always you leave us with a bit of want for more... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kevin, No wonder you're losing sleep! Excellent write.  It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
kev, ohhh i liked this one A LOT...very clever catchy write you have here, especially the ending...had me smiling. excellent as always. hope you're well. so good to see you! take care. amy  "you can't stop |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Very interesting write |
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