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Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

0 posted 2002-05-01 01:40 AM

It’s spring, it’s new
the sun is glad to see me
waking early, bathed in fever
and restlessness
it’s time to run
not pace the border
of this porch
a moment longer

I’m getting off…yes, I am

I’m gonna chase
the hottest, the fastest
the sleekest, the smoothest
the easiest, the most responsive
the reddest, the shiniest
the most powerful, the classiest

I’m gonna chase some cars
if you want me
just whistle

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

1 posted 2002-05-01 01:45 AM

chill Duncan..it's admirable that you adore spring so much but you don't really have to put yourself through that kind of torture...heehee

Casanova
Junior Member

since 1999-06-21

Posts 48
Mays Landing NJ

2 posted 2002-05-01 01:59 AM

Lol cool write, have a great summer! :-)

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2002-05-01 05:51 AM

dug it duncan,
fun view and real treat to read

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

4 posted 2002-05-01 07:14 AM

Yeah yeah yeah...you already know who has the hottest, shiniest fastest cars round here...and they're both red...sure you can keep up???!!! lmbo (by the way, no peeing on the MG or the Lotus when you finally catch 'em!!!)

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

5 posted 2002-05-01 07:28 AM

You Dog!

problem is...whaddayado when you catch one?

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

6 posted 2002-05-01 08:19 AM

Oh my, Duncan! Don't you fool around and get yourself run over from chasing those cars.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

7 posted 2002-05-01 08:28 AM

waking early, bathed in fever
and restlessness
it's time to run
not pace the border
of this porch
a moment longer

I'm getting off yes, I am

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Me thinks ya been on a short leash for too long Duncan

So tell me D-babes...just how long is that porch chain. lol
and me thinks Deer has been saving that graphic just for you rofl
even the mailman is smiling at this one..
yer a cute porch puppy ya know ...
now go lay in the sun and scratch this itch

... and I don't know why ...
Why should love come down and just sweep me away
I want to fly ... but there are so many things in my way.

J Browne

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

8 posted 2002-05-01 10:47 AM

chuckling! I, too, have been accused of behaving like a dog getting out of the gate! (But it wasn't put that nicely!)

Funny one, dunc...but ow...watch out for dem wheels!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

9 posted 2002-05-01 11:09 AM

GR8 write, Phydeaux

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

10 posted 2002-05-01 02:39 PM

I tried to brake in time...

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

11 posted 2002-05-01 07:59 PM

Oh Duncan, this is super....very cute...
I got a good chuckle from this poem...

I can imagine that some sleek, ready to
rumble dog would think this....

Very good!!!

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

12 posted 2002-05-01 08:10 PM

Pffiieeeeet!!! Darn, how do you write whistle???

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

13 posted 2002-05-02 05:43 AM

Sounds fair...James

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

14 posted 2002-05-02 12:02 PM

I think you are chasing redheads,not red cars. LOL
Sandra

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