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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-04-30 11:47 PM




(This is for you, my sweet Joanna, I miss you so much and love you sooooooo much!)

A Moment Written In The Stars
By: Noah Eaton
4/30/02

Sweet Joanna, how I spend the days dreaming
Of holding you close to my heart and hearing you breathing
Every day while you're at work I sigh, smiling
Waiting to see you come home just so I see how you're doing

Sweet Joanna, I don't know where to begin
To tell you how much you mean to me
You have become my motivation everyday, helping me get through my isolation
Happy just thinking I can finally see you this summer and claim to believe in destiny

Sweet Joanna, you make the spring seem so real to me
Butterflies come dancing like children on recess around my head
Pinch me, I know that this is real and for once I am not just dreaming
I still dream all the time that in the near future we are wed

Sweet Joanna, I still dream of some dolce vita
That lies ahead for us both, I would promise you anything
Whenever I envision your smile I get full moon fever
You are the most beautiful girl in the world that I want to make happy

Sweet Joanna, I dream of sharing with you
A moment written in the stars
To love and kiss your sweet tender lips so very soon
So you can see how special to me you always are...
Sweet Joanna...


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-30-2002 11:48 PM).]

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Morcastlin
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1 posted 2002-05-01 12:30 PM


Dear, sweet, romantic Noah! This is just a gorgeous love-note-poem! She is quite a lucky lady to receive such attention from you! Beautifully written, my friend!

Love,
Bonnie

"I want to Live! Life is a banquet and most poor bastards are starving to death!" -Auntie Mame

CocoBaci
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2 posted 2002-05-01 12:40 PM


(((MistletoeAngel)), you've captured the essence of true love and I wish4u and Joanna a life of neverending joy...
You sure do write a beautiful love poem...
Hugs2UpoetFriend
*~coco~*

Suetang
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3 posted 2002-05-01 12:59 PM


Hello Noah

Joanna is such a lucky girl to be showered with your words of love.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

Janette
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4 posted 2002-05-01 02:08 AM


Ohhhhh myyyyyyy

Receiving something like this would make any woman swooooooon!

WOW

Muys
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5 posted 2002-05-01 10:21 AM


Dear ~~~*Mistletoe Angel*~~~
I thank you for all you nice words you send me.
You are specale too
Realy I hope she love You
I'm an old lady, but I do
Muys

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6 posted 2002-05-01 11:25 AM


aw noah...methinks you have melted a witch! This is so exuberant and sincere, and well, SWEET...I can picture her reading this one to ya'lls grandchildren someday!
Enchantress
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7 posted 2002-05-01 12:03 PM


Noah, before her departure, Nightshade and I wanted to read one more poem together, and we chose yours.  So glad we did!!
This is perfectly enchanting.
~Hugs from us both~

Corinne
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8 posted 2002-05-01 12:52 PM


Very sweet and lovingly written, Noah. You have a tender, innocent heart. I hope it is always so.


Cor

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9 posted 2002-05-01 01:21 PM



Noah, you are the epitome of SWEET!

All I can say is 'awwwww,' this is lovely!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

ParisGrl
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10 posted 2002-05-01 03:30 PM


Noah,

Joanna is very lucky to have you......this is beautiful.

~Laura~

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11 posted 2002-05-01 04:45 PM


Sigh~ Noah~

this is sooooo soooo lovely....Joanna is very lucky to have this love....


Lauren~

~Sinking fast into
an ocean of you,
what if I told you,
what if I said
that I love you
do we dare cross
that line between your
heart and mine~

SmittenKitten
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12 posted 2002-05-02 11:20 PM



SweetNoah~ Beautifully written as usual Mr. Romantic   Love looks so good on you!

*hugs*
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

ShadowRider
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13 posted 2002-05-02 11:25 PM


every note rings true
like it was written in my soul
(somebody sang that once)  
We opened your love letter
and it opened us, Amigo.

You, of the perfect heart,
writes of a perfect love

jeff

Ivy Rose
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14 posted 2002-05-02 11:29 PM


Noah...A really gorgeous love poem that I'm sure will touch Joanna's heart.  ***Ivy Rose
JamesMichael
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15 posted 2002-05-03 06:22 AM


Hope you get many moments written in the stars...James
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