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Suetang
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0 posted 2002-04-30 11:35 PM


It certainly pays to be somebody
Particularly in the face of death
There are those who are so often glorified
Before they've taken their final breath

Then there are those who are sadly forgotten
Victims of abuse and poverty
They are not given the time of day
And no one is willing to see

There are men who survived the war
Yet so many who can't find their feet
There are alarming numbers of our youth
Who cannot even survive the street

The 'throw away kids' of our society
Are abandoned and void of love
Let's hope they find more compassion
When they make the journey up above

I read about a boy named David
At age 12 he was a ward of the state
His situation was virtually hopeless
His so called life had sealed his fate

He would take comfort and warmth in a dryer
So often found at the laundromat
At age 18 he was found dead in a stairwell
Of some high rise commission flats

Cheap coffins made from chipboard
No flowers to mark their place
No mourners beside the graveside
No tears and simply no face

What has happened to our society?
We should hang our heads in shame
For those poor souls who needed our help
But were buried without the dignity of their name

* * *

I was deeply moved by an article I read
in our daily newspaper, written by a
youth worker named Les Twentyman.Les
has been a tireless speaker for the
homeless youth in our society but his
voice so often goes unheard.We need
to reach out to these people and show
we care instead of pushing them aside
in the hope that the problem will go away

Suetang

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1 posted 2002-04-30 11:57 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Sue, this is sooooo yerrible, sweet friend, it breaks my heart to see so many caught up in this act of selfishness and pride in oneselves while those who need it the most are left like lonely angels! (big hugggsssssss) My heart goes out to all these special people and I only wish we could all get closer to one another and help them with all our hearts, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Larry C
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2 posted 2002-05-01 12:18 PM


Sue,
I'll never be able to understand how the world can't value it's children, never. Thank you for your write.

Casanova
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3 posted 2002-05-01 01:53 AM


Sue, Great write, And thanks for bringing this out! It is something that hoestly, often gets forggoten. Thanks again. -Cas
Saunni
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4 posted 2002-05-01 02:05 AM


Suetang, this is stunning, and it is a shame the way our world is today. So much sadness in it. Great write and very expressive and true to heart.

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

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5 posted 2002-05-01 12:53 PM


Sue:  I hope many, many people read your poem.  This is such a tragic situation and it's worldwide of course.  There must be more help for these children of the streets and the other forgotten people!

Betty Lou Hebert

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6 posted 2002-05-01 02:33 PM


I'm glad you're the one sounding the call. Let's hope many people read this.
Magnus
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7 posted 2002-05-01 03:42 PM


Much truth here Sue....worldwide....and we
sit back and watch....

You are an angel....and your compassion
speaks loudly of your heart...

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8 posted 2002-05-04 02:39 PM


This was a writing of hope for change.  You did a superb job Sue of telling it like it sadly is.  I hope and pray that things change for the better.  For some of these kids it is over, but for some there is much to do.  God Bless You Sue, Roger


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