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Death of innocence
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Death of innocence |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
I haven't written in a while.. sooo.. i hope its not too scarry.  a scared child hides within feeling all of her fears at once tears begin to fill her eyes inside another part of her dies. she begins to drowned in an endless sea of sorrow asking only one question:why? why did he hurt me the way he did? looking at the sun, she plunges into the deep one last time she says goodbye. "Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today" |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Scary, no...not at all. A little sad and not sure I liked the ending...seems someone was taking their life... Why, asking why? Gosh, we all have done that. Sometimes it is best just to say, "It wasn't my fault" Lots of power in this poem....Don't feel afraid to write that...It is perfectly OK. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
not scary at all, introspective..soul searching |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
Very sad yes, but also very well written. Cheer up! Don't let the "he's" in this world get you down, there are too many of them. "Why should I live? Why should I do anything? Is there in life any purpose which the inevitable death that awaits me does not undo and destroy?" -Tols |
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Dusk Treader
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Never let "him" take you down, for the sun and the heavens are always within your grasp. Sad piece of writing, but I hope it helped purge you of some pain. Keep writing Cassers "A hard, cold wisom is required for goodness to accomplish good. Goodness without wisdom always accomplishes evil" - Robert Heinlein |
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